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21/16/2010 c14 BearvsCobra
You don't exactly have the best rep for updating quickly as you've been at this story for 3 years now, but i love the story, so hopefully, you'll update. :)
You don't exactly have the best rep for updating quickly as you've been at this story for 3 years now, but i love the story, so hopefully, you'll update. :)
1/7/2010 c13 Reader
aw so cute
aw so cute
12/27/2009 c13 SunlitSky
This story is so cute! I love it. Fictionpress has been down several times today and I felt like i was glued to my refresh button so that I could continue this story. You really know how to draw in your readers- the first chapter is certainly unique and daring, and it captures attention to say the least. hehe. I'm a little confused by Jay's personality. If he has this confident suaveness, why is he constantly pursuing her? Why doesn't he have any friends? And, just like all your readers I suppose, why the heck was he stealing in the first place? And who is the true stealing villain? Oh the intrigue! I can't wait to see where you take this. Please update soon! Thank you so much for sharing your rather humorous work here- it makes me happy. :)
This story is so cute! I love it. Fictionpress has been down several times today and I felt like i was glued to my refresh button so that I could continue this story. You really know how to draw in your readers- the first chapter is certainly unique and daring, and it captures attention to say the least. hehe. I'm a little confused by Jay's personality. If he has this confident suaveness, why is he constantly pursuing her? Why doesn't he have any friends? And, just like all your readers I suppose, why the heck was he stealing in the first place? And who is the true stealing villain? Oh the intrigue! I can't wait to see where you take this. Please update soon! Thank you so much for sharing your rather humorous work here- it makes me happy. :)
12/26/2009 c13 kitasky123
sorry i was to lazy to log on... this chapter was really good. i liked it a lot and cant wait for more.
sorry i was to lazy to log on... this chapter was really good. i liked it a lot and cant wait for more.
12/24/2009 c13 l'heautontimoroumenos
Great chapter. Well, I liked it. Please do try to update fast but don't rush it. Take your time if you need to. I know how it is. I can't update quickly to save my life, so... But then again, please try :)
Great chapter. Well, I liked it. Please do try to update fast but don't rush it. Take your time if you need to. I know how it is. I can't update quickly to save my life, so... But then again, please try :)