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2/8/2007 c1 Jenny Rebel
Very nice. The simplicity of the words add to the deeper meaning of the whole poem
2/6/2007 c1 24IwasSmitten
Makes me think of piercing green eyes. Very nice. I suppose brown eyes will never pierce...
2/2/2007 c1 43je suis une pomme du terre
Oh, wow... I love haikus, and this one... it was so intense! I love the image you create of the daring green eyes... it's amazing.

Wonderful work.

~Tender Hostility
2/2/2007 c1 58ChildeOfChaos
I love this and I love your title. Just a few words and you really put a picture in my head.
1/28/2007 c1 20Kaye90
ooh, gave me the shivers!

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