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2/28/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
sad and pwoerful piece... not what I expected from the title or the beginning... awesome job
1/29/2007 c1 42The Masked Marauder

very well done though! haha

if you're getting mad cuz i don't have anything constructive to say, its cuz the poem is perfect the way it is!
1/27/2007 c1 38xbreezex
oh my gosh...

this was...


I mean that in the sincerest way possible. I honestly can't even find the words to describe this, wonderful doesn't even cut it.

1/27/2007 c1 32eldrin
It's as if more than the photographs are being burnt...there's the feeling that the self is inscribed in them, and loses something with the memories that wanted to be lost. Nice work.
1/27/2007 c1 25august harlequin
Thank you for the review. It seems as though our poems have similar subjects.

"Take a photograph.

Treasure its memories,

Or spend a lifetime trying to forget it."

I loved those three lines more than any I have read in quite sometime. Though this poem indeed reminds of those memories which I am trying to forget, it does so in a beautiful and pleasurable method.

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