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2/5/2007 c1 30Charmed.imsure-Always
Very intense and quickened pace throughout the whole poem. Very good way to end it though. Sad but nice to read. You have talent!

-LC
2/2/2007 c1 35Kannibal Klehmenteen
Wow.

Its amazing.

The rhythm is incredible and the rhyming is subtle, but it adds to the flow.
1/28/2007 c1 8Room Without A Door
By the way, thanks for the review!

It's the title I was really drawn to, "Queen Of Paper Crowns" - the title speaks alot in itself. The poem itself is very well written too, "The palace doesn't know it's queen". Love the whole anology going on - hope to hear more from you soon!

-Room Without A Door
1/27/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
I love this! I am going to add it to my C2!

Best Wishes!
1/27/2007 c1 12Mousey-Boi
Ooh, good job. I like it, though I can't relate, it flows really well. It's awesome :) The imagery is excellent and I've not seen another poem with this subject before. I would love to know the rest of the story behind it.

The 'embellished jeans' make me assume it has a modern bend, even though there aren't technically any princesses that would be thrown out nowadays. Her banging on the door... Ideas have started running through my mind, filling in the blanks, and that's a very good thing. Leaves me wanting more.

Great job on the poem, I can't see anything wrong with it. ^_^

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