for Blind Yourself11/23/2013 c14 
3menima211
I like insanity. And Arthur seems to have a lot of it. This story leaves me so confused but in a good way. Everything and everyone is so insane, confusing, mysterious. I never know whats going to happen next. I have a feeling that Arthur is indeed the one who raped Cecilia though. This story makes me so scared, so scared for Steven...
3menima211I like insanity. And Arthur seems to have a lot of it. This story leaves me so confused but in a good way. Everything and everyone is so insane, confusing, mysterious. I never know whats going to happen next. I have a feeling that Arthur is indeed the one who raped Cecilia though. This story makes me so scared, so scared for Steven...
10/3/2013 c14 dizasterdeb
This is fascinating! I have no clue what is going on which I love. This is the first story of yours that I have read and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you. DDx
This is fascinating! I have no clue what is going on which I love. This is the first story of yours that I have read and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you. DDx
9/10/2013 c14 serrival
Holy crap, an update! Thanks so much for continuing this story. It's one of the most gripping I've ever read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Holy crap, an update! Thanks so much for continuing this story. It's one of the most gripping I've ever read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
9/5/2013 c14 5ramblingrobin
The anticipation is killing me, here. I really need Arthur and Steven to do something.
5ramblingrobinThe anticipation is killing me, here. I really need Arthur and Steven to do something.
8/17/2013 c14 krlsen
:D
:D
8/13/2013 c14 sally
This brightened my day, im so happy another chapter:D
This brightened my day, im so happy another chapter:D
8/10/2013 c14 5Allanasha Ke Kiri
OMG! OMgOMGOMGOMGOMG! An Update This makes me so happy, you wouldn't believe it lol. I'd just about given up hope that this would be continued, and it is. ve very happy th
5Allanasha Ke KiriOMG! OMgOMGOMGOMGOMG! An Update This makes me so happy, you wouldn't believe it lol. I'd just about given up hope that this would be continued, and it is. ve very happy th
8/7/2013 c14 PatchouliPatchwork
Oh my god. I'm so happy this updated. I was scared it was going to be an author's note saying this story would never be completed. But nope, it was a chapter. I really just want to see more of the dynamic between everyone and what happens to our lovely protagonist.
Oh my god. I'm so happy this updated. I was scared it was going to be an author's note saying this story would never be completed. But nope, it was a chapter. I really just want to see more of the dynamic between everyone and what happens to our lovely protagonist.
8/6/2013 c14 4GrangerDanger333
Another chapter? Hurray! I can't wait to have some answers as to what is going on with Arthur and the others. If I was in Steven's position, I would seriously annoyed for how little he knows about everything happening around him, but he seems kind of calm. Anyway, I'm still loving it!
4GrangerDanger333Another chapter? Hurray! I can't wait to have some answers as to what is going on with Arthur and the others. If I was in Steven's position, I would seriously annoyed for how little he knows about everything happening around him, but he seems kind of calm. Anyway, I'm still loving it!
8/4/2013 c14 rainbownostalgia
My god this story is a gorgeous gem. Just finished re-reading for who knows how many times last night. Because the updates are so sparsely scattered (more please? :) ) I actually forgot what the story was about (sorry! I read way too much on FanFiction and barely on FictionPress so I was confused) and had to read chapter 13 again before chapter 14. But honestly I remembered what I loved about it so much and actually ended up re-reading the whole thing before the new update so I could prolong the story (curse me for reading incomplete stories). Truly you are a gifted writer, that much I can see by the detail and transition of your story- personally, I think there's no story like yours! Not sure if this is good or bad, but it really has all the kinds of things I like in it (very logical, strong-willed character who can think for himself: sexy, mysterious guy who is obsessed with said character in a disturbingly adorable infatuation; and lastly an unwillingly attitude that gradually eases into affection, as I know it will because you promised!) This is my favorite online unofficial kind of story, even among the loads I read among FF, so I hope my admiration truly moves your heart (or your pencil, preferably the latter) and know that I'll always be supporting you! Cheers for hoping this review isn't too long, considering I can't tell because it's a mobile review (gosh it takes too painfully long to write these...but I simply had to get it done).
My god this story is a gorgeous gem. Just finished re-reading for who knows how many times last night. Because the updates are so sparsely scattered (more please? :) ) I actually forgot what the story was about (sorry! I read way too much on FanFiction and barely on FictionPress so I was confused) and had to read chapter 13 again before chapter 14. But honestly I remembered what I loved about it so much and actually ended up re-reading the whole thing before the new update so I could prolong the story (curse me for reading incomplete stories). Truly you are a gifted writer, that much I can see by the detail and transition of your story- personally, I think there's no story like yours! Not sure if this is good or bad, but it really has all the kinds of things I like in it (very logical, strong-willed character who can think for himself: sexy, mysterious guy who is obsessed with said character in a disturbingly adorable infatuation; and lastly an unwillingly attitude that gradually eases into affection, as I know it will because you promised!) This is my favorite online unofficial kind of story, even among the loads I read among FF, so I hope my admiration truly moves your heart (or your pencil, preferably the latter) and know that I'll always be supporting you! Cheers for hoping this review isn't too long, considering I can't tell because it's a mobile review (gosh it takes too painfully long to write these...but I simply had to get it done).