for Blind Yourself2/6/2007 c3 deleteaccount128413
wow
i can just imagine a stiffled evil laugh XD
nice... can't wait for more, please update soon! ^^
wow
i can just imagine a stiffled evil laugh XD
nice... can't wait for more, please update soon! ^^
2/5/2007 c3 
7KaleLongsworth
O, sounds like it's going to get creepy. Shame on Lucas for being a racist and a homophobe. How dose Steven live with him? I know I couldn't.
7KaleLongsworthO, sounds like it's going to get creepy. Shame on Lucas for being a racist and a homophobe. How dose Steven live with him? I know I couldn't.
2/4/2007 c2 deleteaccount128413
erm... fictionpress is messin' me up .
anyway... loved it and please update soon
arthur sounds cool... and funny XD
erm... fictionpress is messin' me up .
anyway... loved it and please update soon
arthur sounds cool... and funny XD
1/31/2007 c2 Losing Grip
I really like it so far and I can't wait for the next chapter!
I really like it so far and I can't wait for the next chapter!
1/30/2007 c2 5tearitrightup
the beginning was a bit confusing, but it was hilarious. he's gay? i just foudn out. not that i have anything against gay people...just that it was a bit surprsiing. i like this story so far. i see a lot of potential. the story plot is being built rather nicely, although i wish you'd explain what happened in the beginning of this chapter a bit more.
5tearitrightupthe beginning was a bit confusing, but it was hilarious. he's gay? i just foudn out. not that i have anything against gay people...just that it was a bit surprsiing. i like this story so far. i see a lot of potential. the story plot is being built rather nicely, although i wish you'd explain what happened in the beginning of this chapter a bit more.
1/30/2007 c2 3Abstruse Blue
Well i love it and i am so excited about this next chapter with the bus. :D -rubs hands together-
3Abstruse BlueWell i love it and i am so excited about this next chapter with the bus. :D -rubs hands together-
1/27/2007 c1 5tearitrightup
whoa. you guys were cutting up venison? where do you live? by the way, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
5tearitrightupwhoa. you guys were cutting up venison? where do you live? by the way, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
1/27/2007 c1 10BrokenHeartedAngel
well i really really liek this! are you supposed to cut dear in your kitchen? arent u supposed to in your basement or garage or somthing? GOOD JOB THO!
10BrokenHeartedAngelwell i really really liek this! are you supposed to cut dear in your kitchen? arent u supposed to in your basement or garage or somthing? GOOD JOB THO!