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2/6/2007 c1 24IwasSmitten
Definitely angst...I like how you have the "spoken words" on the outside and the "thoughts" in pararentheses. I really like "i think with my heart (that stubborn thing)".
2/4/2007 c1 Coda Lovelance
Angsty? Yes. But still good? Totally. The only suggestion I can think of is breaking it up into lines, for easier reading.
2/2/2007 c1 12FairyOnTheEdge
I really love the way this is written.

It makes it more real I guess you could say.
1/29/2007 c1 Rhea
This really touched me...It is so strong and yet it is inspiring...I just love it

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