for Thinking With My Heart2/6/2007 c1 
24IwasSmitten
Definitely angst...I like how you have the "spoken words" on the outside and the "thoughts" in pararentheses. I really like "i think with my heart (that stubborn thing)".
24IwasSmittenDefinitely angst...I like how you have the "spoken words" on the outside and the "thoughts" in pararentheses. I really like "i think with my heart (that stubborn thing)".
2/4/2007 c1 Coda Lovelance
Angsty? Yes. But still good? Totally. The only suggestion I can think of is breaking it up into lines, for easier reading.
Angsty? Yes. But still good? Totally. The only suggestion I can think of is breaking it up into lines, for easier reading.
2/2/2007 c1 12FairyOnTheEdge
I really love the way this is written.
It makes it more real I guess you could say.
12FairyOnTheEdgeI really love the way this is written.
It makes it more real I guess you could say.
1/29/2007 c1 Rhea
This really touched me...It is so strong and yet it is inspiring...I just love it
This really touched me...It is so strong and yet it is inspiring...I just love it