1/28/2007 c1 2you'll see
Unlike the first reviewer, I like knowing what is going on. It sounds like they're in a dancing studio perhaps? Was the scene where you pull away from the parking lot with him sitting by a pillar special or just something that happened every time?
It almost souns as if though you don't know too much about him, you know him. I enjoyed reading this.
Unlike the first reviewer, I like knowing what is going on. It sounds like they're in a dancing studio perhaps? Was the scene where you pull away from the parking lot with him sitting by a pillar special or just something that happened every time?
It almost souns as if though you don't know too much about him, you know him. I enjoyed reading this.
1/28/2007 c1 32Morbane
Ironically, we now feel as though we know more about 'him' than 'you'. I like the thoughtful, unhurried pace of this piece as well as the fact that while this is set at a studio you never feel the need to tell us what kind exactly. You start out a little jerkily, and seem to find the pace as you get into it.
Ironically, we now feel as though we know more about 'him' than 'you'. I like the thoughtful, unhurried pace of this piece as well as the fact that while this is set at a studio you never feel the need to tell us what kind exactly. You start out a little jerkily, and seem to find the pace as you get into it.