for In Too Deep7/11/2008 c4 
2Eredae
XD
I'm really starting to like this story, please keep updating!
It's soo cot :P
2EredaeXD
I'm really starting to like this story, please keep updating!
It's soo cot :P
12/31/2007 c2 Eredae
Besides some grammar mistakes, I think it was a bid odd that he kissed him so early on it the story like that. Maybe you should explain why he did it? Apart from that this isn't half bad - I'm looking forward to Bo's reaction. Please, please do not let this end up completely cliched and have him turn gay or something, it would ruin the appeal - for me at least.
Besides some grammar mistakes, I think it was a bid odd that he kissed him so early on it the story like that. Maybe you should explain why he did it? Apart from that this isn't half bad - I'm looking forward to Bo's reaction. Please, please do not let this end up completely cliched and have him turn gay or something, it would ruin the appeal - for me at least.