for Faithfully8/20/2007 c1 
32Serason
I always thought that inanimate objects were just that, but now I can see that that its possible that they have feelings, and if they do then they are so incrediably unselfish that its beautiful.
Thank you for opening my mind, and for a wonderfully written poem.
32SerasonI always thought that inanimate objects were just that, but now I can see that that its possible that they have feelings, and if they do then they are so incrediably unselfish that its beautiful.
Thank you for opening my mind, and for a wonderfully written poem.
2/3/2007 c1 12eighteen hundred
There's a lot of really good stuff in this piece. Most striking to me was the rhythm/flow of the poem which was very regular and calm, fitting to the subject matter. There were a couple of strong images: "where the edges dance as moonlight falls" really stuck out to me. The first line was my favorite though, the suggestion of it, the personal use of "you." Great stuff!
12eighteen hundredThere's a lot of really good stuff in this piece. Most striking to me was the rhythm/flow of the poem which was very regular and calm, fitting to the subject matter. There were a couple of strong images: "where the edges dance as moonlight falls" really stuck out to me. The first line was my favorite though, the suggestion of it, the personal use of "you." Great stuff!
1/31/2007 c1 20The Wandering Musician
Oh! I like this poem. The rhyme and rhythm work out perfectly! The word choice is perfect and gives the poem a very shimmery, surreal quality that I really like. :-) Great job!
20The Wandering MusicianOh! I like this poem. The rhyme and rhythm work out perfectly! The word choice is perfect and gives the poem a very shimmery, surreal quality that I really like. :-) Great job!
1/28/2007 c1 132lucretiabaine
I love this! The rhythm is excellent, the wording is beautiful, and so is the overall message. It paints a pretty picture.
LXF
132lucretiabaineI love this! The rhythm is excellent, the wording is beautiful, and so is the overall message. It paints a pretty picture.
LXF