for Broken Angel1/30/2007 c1 
191Trinity Joselyn Carter
This is the second poem I've read (2 outta 3 ain't bad!) but they seem to have a reoccuring theme about angels. I like this one a little better than that last one if I had to rate them. I can tell the heartache and pain in this one a little more. If they were a series of poems (like established) it would make a little more sense... like the angel is broken but then finds her true love (in the poem beneath this one) but maybe that's what you were going for.
191Trinity Joselyn CarterThis is the second poem I've read (2 outta 3 ain't bad!) but they seem to have a reoccuring theme about angels. I like this one a little better than that last one if I had to rate them. I can tell the heartache and pain in this one a little more. If they were a series of poems (like established) it would make a little more sense... like the angel is broken but then finds her true love (in the poem beneath this one) but maybe that's what you were going for.