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12/16/2007 c9 1DRAGONFIRE04
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. I like to see some flashbacks about their lives.
12/16/2007 c1 1LittleRedRodeo
One thing I noticed about your prose is that it's really well-written. The epigram and opneing paragraph were both very interesting. However, you keep making a common mistake throughout the chapter. "Your" in the dialogue should be written as "you're." Another error I pointed out was at the end of this chapter, when you described a man as 6'5". Since this is fantasy, we can't assume that they use the same measuring units as we do. See if you can replace this with something else, like "a head taller" or "as tall as a ladder," just for example. Since you're really good at descriptive writing (I can picture your characters perfectly), this shouldn't be a problem for you.
5/15/2007 c7 1DRAGONFIRE04
Thanks for updating I like the two chapter please keep the chapter coming.
5/5/2007 c5 DRAGONFIRE04
please updat this story, I like how it going. It is a very good story.
1/29/2007 c1 17Wilkem21
OK. Interesting story line. i am eager to hear more, so i'll be sure to label this story under an alert somewhere. Hope you'll have time to read my random ramblings.

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