for Self Destructive Drowning2/12/2007 c1 
59Frore
Favorites! Wonderful poem! The imagery is so nice, as odd as that sounds for this subject matter, especially this line, which someone else also like:
"And the endless calm is the only thing certain
Where smooth white walls can hold me
And choked bubbles sing lullabies
Like a sailor lost beneath sea."
Delicious. I hope to see more poetry and stories from you!
59FroreFavorites! Wonderful poem! The imagery is so nice, as odd as that sounds for this subject matter, especially this line, which someone else also like:
"And the endless calm is the only thing certain
Where smooth white walls can hold me
And choked bubbles sing lullabies
Like a sailor lost beneath sea."
Delicious. I hope to see more poetry and stories from you!
1/29/2007 c1 49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
M, I love angst.
Favorite lines:
"And the endless calm is the only thing certain
Where smooth white walls can hold me
And choked bubbles sing lullabies
Like a sailor lost beneath sea"
~
Sounds like you have so much pain, so much heartache, that all you want to do is die. As if the sound of the word "death" is a comfort to a lonely soul.
Loved every second of it.
Erica Sky
49Toxic.Industrial.WasteM, I love angst.
Favorite lines:
"And the endless calm is the only thing certain
Where smooth white walls can hold me
And choked bubbles sing lullabies
Like a sailor lost beneath sea"
~
Sounds like you have so much pain, so much heartache, that all you want to do is die. As if the sound of the word "death" is a comfort to a lonely soul.
Loved every second of it.
Erica Sky