for The Bellbird Fancy1/30/2007 c1 
871no.peace.los.angeles
Very nice! It's not often that you come across a piece so eloquently worded on this site, and this is certainly nice. The rhyme works so well, too, as it keeps a rhythm throughout the piece, and the words you've chosen really have made this piece feel as though I'm in Victorian England or a similar time period. Gorgeous and elegant. Very nice work indeed. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesVery nice! It's not often that you come across a piece so eloquently worded on this site, and this is certainly nice. The rhyme works so well, too, as it keeps a rhythm throughout the piece, and the words you've chosen really have made this piece feel as though I'm in Victorian England or a similar time period. Gorgeous and elegant. Very nice work indeed. Keep writing! :)
1/29/2007 c1 24eyes of sky
I believe I may need a dictionary to appreciate this fully, it lost me towards the end! Good use of alliteration and rhyme, though some lines didn't quite scan.
24eyes of skyI believe I may need a dictionary to appreciate this fully, it lost me towards the end! Good use of alliteration and rhyme, though some lines didn't quite scan.