for familiar bones7/20/2009 c1 
1tonight we bloom
wow, that was beautiful. i love the last two lines, they were so poignant.
1tonight we bloomwow, that was beautiful. i love the last two lines, they were so poignant.
5/14/2008 c1 19Perfectly Paradox
Wow. I love the consonance of speckled and knuckles. That is simply delightful. I love the simile, "he breathes like a mountain top/ (each breath is enormous)" Nicely done.
19Perfectly ParadoxWow. I love the consonance of speckled and knuckles. That is simply delightful. I love the simile, "he breathes like a mountain top/ (each breath is enormous)" Nicely done.
4/3/2007 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Beautiful - the stanza describing how he breathes like a mountain - breathtaking. Lovely. I'm in awe.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietBeautiful - the stanza describing how he breathes like a mountain - breathtaking. Lovely. I'm in awe.
Juliet.
2/27/2007 c1 breezy nostrils
there's a familiarity just reading your work. i wasn't sure you were still posting...well i left a little while ago but i'm still reviewing. hehe
there's a familiarity just reading your work. i wasn't sure you were still posting...well i left a little while ago but i'm still reviewing. hehe
1/30/2007 c1 63lackluster
i'm wondering what the inspiration for this was. i love it, really. especially the ending, "dipped down low in the february blues/find me inside myself, and let me find you" is so beautiful. great work here. truly amazing.
63lacklusteri'm wondering what the inspiration for this was. i love it, really. especially the ending, "dipped down low in the february blues/find me inside myself, and let me find you" is so beautiful. great work here. truly amazing.