for Run to Woo11/29/2008 c1 
23fatbird33
love it! it's awesome really, great use of lanuage here. the rhyming was fantastic and the theme relatable. nice job:)
23fatbird33love it! it's awesome really, great use of lanuage here. the rhyming was fantastic and the theme relatable. nice job:)
1/31/2007 c1 Michelle Habibi
hey! not a bad poem. not at all. its sad. sorry, im notthe best reviewer that exists in this world but i try my best, lol. you should really try to get it published. i recently entered a poetry contest and now im one of the semi-finalists and my poem is getting published. there's a new contest every month and i really think you stand a chance winning because this poem is really good. if your interested, go to bye!
hey! not a bad poem. not at all. its sad. sorry, im notthe best reviewer that exists in this world but i try my best, lol. you should really try to get it published. i recently entered a poetry contest and now im one of the semi-finalists and my poem is getting published. there's a new contest every month and i really think you stand a chance winning because this poem is really good. if your interested, go to bye!
1/30/2007 c1 14Kahn the Hun
Yay, an decent poem! I've been searching for one for quite a while. I really, really, really, sincerely, extremely loved this! I don't have any criticisms for it, sry.
14Kahn the HunYay, an decent poem! I've been searching for one for quite a while. I really, really, really, sincerely, extremely loved this! I don't have any criticisms for it, sry.