for Becoming Numb1/30/2007 c1 
49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
I liked this, has a heavy metal song feel to it.
I love how the poem switches back and forth from the feeling of a lifeless doll trying to let other's tell her what to do and control, to the feel of panic that her life isn't going to be fulfilled if does just that, then back again.
Great
Erica Sky
49Toxic.Industrial.WasteI liked this, has a heavy metal song feel to it.
I love how the poem switches back and forth from the feeling of a lifeless doll trying to let other's tell her what to do and control, to the feel of panic that her life isn't going to be fulfilled if does just that, then back again.
Great
Erica Sky