for Alive1/27/2008 c1 xEutopiax
Hey!
Interesting drabble, I thoroughly enjoyed it; very deep.
Thank You,
Kaiyako K.
Hey!
Interesting drabble, I thoroughly enjoyed it; very deep.
Thank You,
Kaiyako K.
7/7/2007 c1 
6McQuinn
GAH! Scary-assed last line. "That is, if I were still alive." That makes me jump out of my skin.
And...HA! at your author's note. I guess I won't be putting up any corrections here. :p
Anyway, I really enjoyed the simplicity of this. Because it's short, it reads like a bullet. It's also a reminder to readers that teaching kids using obscure warnings is just simply *fucking stupid*. :p
Keep on writing, dude.
-McQuinn
6McQuinnGAH! Scary-assed last line. "That is, if I were still alive." That makes me jump out of my skin.
And...HA! at your author's note. I guess I won't be putting up any corrections here. :p
Anyway, I really enjoyed the simplicity of this. Because it's short, it reads like a bullet. It's also a reminder to readers that teaching kids using obscure warnings is just simply *fucking stupid*. :p
Keep on writing, dude.
-McQuinn
3/16/2007 c1 9just a ray of sunshine
I don't know why; I love this.
Well, I do know why. Maybe because it rocks.
Keep writing! I love reading stuff like this. It amazes me.
9just a ray of sunshineI don't know why; I love this.
Well, I do know why. Maybe because it rocks.
Keep writing! I love reading stuff like this. It amazes me.
2/8/2007 c1 10channel-violet
This story is extreamly real and to the point. Really I thought this was touching and beautiful and the ending makes my spine shiver.
Love your writing
-Mika
10channel-violetThis story is extreamly real and to the point. Really I thought this was touching and beautiful and the ending makes my spine shiver.
Love your writing
-Mika
2/3/2007 c1 133Alana Starr
First off, this is so touching. So amazing and real (I think that's the right word I'm looking for.) I'm going to favorite it!
And I would like to thank you for your very kind review. I just came home from work and in kind of a crappy mood and your review cheered me right up! So thank you so much.
133Alana StarrFirst off, this is so touching. So amazing and real (I think that's the right word I'm looking for.) I'm going to favorite it!
And I would like to thank you for your very kind review. I just came home from work and in kind of a crappy mood and your review cheered me right up! So thank you so much.
2/3/2007 c1 32TryNotTo
Very jolting, that ending. Will you be continuing in the same thread or posting other unrelated oneshots?
~ Rebecca
32TryNotToVery jolting, that ending. Will you be continuing in the same thread or posting other unrelated oneshots?
~ Rebecca
1/31/2007 c1 63lackluster
the ending is surprising. especially that last sentence reminds me of "lovely bones" by alice sebold. i love it, though. continue?
63lacklusterthe ending is surprising. especially that last sentence reminds me of "lovely bones" by alice sebold. i love it, though. continue?