for Happily Ever After2/25/2007 c1 deadrosepetals
I liked how it represented the way you shouldn't doubt the fact that you can have a fairy tale ending even though it is not as you planned.
I liked how it represented the way you shouldn't doubt the fact that you can have a fairy tale ending even though it is not as you planned.
2/10/2007 c1 
3browneyes-x
Wow. You reviewed my poem Fairytales, so I decided to come read your poem. I absolutely loved it. It is so greatly written, (yes, I know greatly isn't a word:P) and the rhyming and rhythm was magnificent. I loved the Cinderella, Beauty and the Beast and Red Riding Hood allusions.
Great!
~Ashlie
3browneyes-xWow. You reviewed my poem Fairytales, so I decided to come read your poem. I absolutely loved it. It is so greatly written, (yes, I know greatly isn't a word:P) and the rhyming and rhythm was magnificent. I loved the Cinderella, Beauty and the Beast and Red Riding Hood allusions.
Great!
~Ashlie
2/3/2007 c1 31poemkitten7
Aww another beautifully written poem. I really like the flow and rhyming. Your wording always make a great impact, too. =] Keep up the great work. -Sara
31poemkitten7Aww another beautifully written poem. I really like the flow and rhyming. Your wording always make a great impact, too. =] Keep up the great work. -Sara
2/2/2007 c1 40Rachel-Jane Kensington
Aww, that's really tragically beautiful. I can picture her sitting, waiting, wishing for ever and ever. I loved how you portrayed her desires with as though the speaker and the audience were looking down on this poor creature with pity. How dreams that are romaticized and talked about so often were hinted to be misleading and unrealistic. The mention of Beauty and the Beast was a particularly interesting touch since theirs is one of the few commedable fair tales in my book since they are one of the few pairs forced to get to know one another before "falling in love". I also loved how perfect was in quotations, suggesting that perfect isn't really all it's cracked up to be. Vair nice ;)
-Rachel
ps- Thanks so much for reviewing my work!
40Rachel-Jane KensingtonAww, that's really tragically beautiful. I can picture her sitting, waiting, wishing for ever and ever. I loved how you portrayed her desires with as though the speaker and the audience were looking down on this poor creature with pity. How dreams that are romaticized and talked about so often were hinted to be misleading and unrealistic. The mention of Beauty and the Beast was a particularly interesting touch since theirs is one of the few commedable fair tales in my book since they are one of the few pairs forced to get to know one another before "falling in love". I also loved how perfect was in quotations, suggesting that perfect isn't really all it's cracked up to be. Vair nice ;)
-Rachel
ps- Thanks so much for reviewing my work!
2/2/2007 c1 463All Alone With Her Thoughts
Doesn't everyone want a happy ending? Nice piece.
Thanks for the review...yeah, I meant proof. xD
Rowan.
463All Alone With Her ThoughtsDoesn't everyone want a happy ending? Nice piece.
Thanks for the review...yeah, I meant proof. xD
Rowan.
1/31/2007 c1 58Inkspilled
The rhyming worked really well. Some parts were too long, but still fit in pretty well. :) It's really nicely written.
58InkspilledThe rhyming worked really well. Some parts were too long, but still fit in pretty well. :) It's really nicely written.