6/25/2009 c2 12TheAirIbreathe
Maybe it's just me, but the tenses seemed kind of weird. Lol, I love the humour. So much. Good job :) Waiting for the update. ?
Maybe it's just me, but the tenses seemed kind of weird. Lol, I love the humour. So much. Good job :) Waiting for the update. ?
8/31/2008 c1 mad-one123
dang dammit, no slash! i think im addicted to slash now. i cant read anything else.bloody hell!
dang dammit, no slash! i think im addicted to slash now. i cant read anything else.bloody hell!
12/22/2007 c2 shepromised-shelied
This sounds really great. Please keep going.
I'm sure it will be wonderful. I f*cking love
Tommy. And you should make this rated M. Please?
Purty pwease? =[ Yeah Yeah, I'm a perv, first step is
admitting it.
Please keep going, you're a fantastic writer.
~ShePromised-SheLied
This sounds really great. Please keep going.
I'm sure it will be wonderful. I f*cking love
Tommy. And you should make this rated M. Please?
Purty pwease? =[ Yeah Yeah, I'm a perv, first step is
admitting it.
Please keep going, you're a fantastic writer.
~ShePromised-SheLied
2/5/2007 c2 luluu
haha my god this is brilliant! lol keep updating i cant wait to find out what happens!
haha my god this is brilliant! lol keep updating i cant wait to find out what happens!
2/5/2007 c2 powerranger
I didn't really like this chapter. Trent wasn't acting like himself. It actually made him seem gay, like he just hasn't come out of the closet. x_x
I still love it though.
I didn't really like this chapter. Trent wasn't acting like himself. It actually made him seem gay, like he just hasn't come out of the closet. x_x
I still love it though.
2/5/2007 c2 SOAKtheSUN
Mmh, I liked this chapter. I think I'm in love with her brother :) looking forward to your next update.
Mmh, I liked this chapter. I think I'm in love with her brother :) looking forward to your next update.
2/4/2007 c2 FDA Approved
Well, it's the same plot, but the story is DEFINITELY a little different. Just a little...besides the main characters, of course. But I'm liking it so far. And I absolutely LOVE Tommy. ;) Keep up the good editing and update soon please!
FDA Approved
Well, it's the same plot, but the story is DEFINITELY a little different. Just a little...besides the main characters, of course. But I'm liking it so far. And I absolutely LOVE Tommy. ;) Keep up the good editing and update soon please!
FDA Approved