2/1/2007 c1 Captain Lucky
I really liked this. It was kind of depressing, but clever - very clever. It really made me think, sort of jerked me out of my own childish fantasies.

2/1/2007 c1 10Physicia
That's some pretty powerful stuff you penned there. The last line gave me shivers and I wonder, is this my life? Hopefully not. Sry, but I have no constructive criticism for you.