for The Wizard of Bright Isle5/5/2017 c10 Your truly3
Most amazing, plot, setting, characters, and all. This would be so awesome as a T.V show ,b so awwesome and most of all the feels . Edkie (yes! that's their new ship name) is soo cute 3 KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! WHOOAH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH, THANK YOU. 3 3 3
Most amazing, plot, setting, characters, and all. This would be so awesome as a T.V show ,b so awwesome and most of all the feels . Edkie (yes! that's their new ship name) is soo cute 3 KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! WHOOAH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH, THANK YOU. 3 3 3
7/7/2016 c8 Guest
Ah, ye olde helicopter parents.
Ah, ye olde helicopter parents.
3/31/2016 c14 nagi
Is it just me or kiernan is becoming more of a yandere stalker?
Is it just me or kiernan is becoming more of a yandere stalker?
3/23/2016 c8 
6Drengade
I have just noticed but in paragraph 4 you use 'new' where it should be 'knew'
6DrengadeI have just noticed but in paragraph 4 you use 'new' where it should be 'knew'
1/23/2016 c17 Anon
Wow, loved it. I read it in one go and it kept me interested throughout :)
Wow, loved it. I read it in one go and it kept me interested throughout :)
6/30/2015 c2 Sarah
Poor Kieran he just got caught in a world he knows nothing about but I hope he makes friends and develops his powers..
Lord Colwyn seems an interesting character and his animosity towards Asita seems like an interesting story.
Poor Kieran he just got caught in a world he knows nothing about but I hope he makes friends and develops his powers..
Lord Colwyn seems an interesting character and his animosity towards Asita seems like an interesting story.
6/30/2015 c1 Sarah
Great start and kieran seems like an interesting character who is nice and gentle towards animals. I'm hooked
Great start and kieran seems like an interesting character who is nice and gentle towards animals. I'm hooked
4/16/2015 c1 LightArray
This is really great! :) Your story is really a great piece. 3 I'm so thankful that you made this story and its sequels. I've read the whole 4 series, and it didn't make me feel boring while reading the books. :D Awesome! The story has a heart! I'm looking forward for a sequel. :) Thanks again author. (y)
This is really great! :) Your story is really a great piece. 3 I'm so thankful that you made this story and its sequels. I've read the whole 4 series, and it didn't make me feel boring while reading the books. :D Awesome! The story has a heart! I'm looking forward for a sequel. :) Thanks again author. (y)
3/1/2015 c17 Emerald Dragon77
I love this story! I can't wait to read the sequels, and your other stories! Best- ;)
I love this story! I can't wait to read the sequels, and your other stories! Best- ;)
12/20/2014 c1 A Fellow Writer
This is truly extraordinary, it seems worthy of publishing. Excellent job.
This is truly extraordinary, it seems worthy of publishing. Excellent job.
11/19/2014 c9 Louis
In a previous chapter Kieran said he had never heard of far-seeing, now he remembers his mentor taught him how to block it?
In a previous chapter Kieran said he had never heard of far-seeing, now he remembers his mentor taught him how to block it?
3/5/2014 c17 Guest
Well done! Quite engaging, well-written, and original. Makes for compelling reading!
Well done! Quite engaging, well-written, and original. Makes for compelling reading!
3/1/2014 c2 1tempted to rock
I still like it. But as good an idea as the whole 'conditioning' and rogue wizard stuff is, the concept is quite muddled and rough around the edges.
Besides - or rather; despite - that, it's an interesting world you created.
1tempted to rockI still like it. But as good an idea as the whole 'conditioning' and rogue wizard stuff is, the concept is quite muddled and rough around the edges.
Besides - or rather; despite - that, it's an interesting world you created.
3/1/2014 c1 tempted to rock
I really like it so far. The concept is good, and it's easy to read. Good job!
I really like it so far. The concept is good, and it's easy to read. Good job!