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2/14/2007 c1 16Melos Atriensis
Oh, this is wonderful! You express yourself so clearly!

I love the flow with the words, and the slight alliteration you used. It makes the poem just flow from the tongue.

It's a wondeful piece!

.:Scarlett:.
2/13/2007 c1 111MaryCurly
What initially attracted me to read this one is that my name is Mary as well. I'm glad I opened it though, because this poem is beautiful. You articulate your thoughts very eloquently. Well done.
2/12/2007 c1 she smolders
One day, I do hope that someone will say the same things about me. This is just lovely.
2/3/2007 c1 31poemkitten7
Wow, your imagery is amazing. Your choice of words were perfect and the way you described her couldn't possibly get any better. Keep up the awesome work! =] -Sara
2/2/2007 c1 1thoughtmaker
A very beautiful poem. She sounds wonderful whoever she is ;). Good work!
2/2/2007 c1 63silentscreamer07
oh..I absolutely love this! And I love the imagery that you used, and the certain word choice..you relaly did a great job with this, the reader could definitly picture this in their mind..you did great! Keep it up! :D
2/2/2007 c1 10BrokenHeartedAngel
aw i love this!

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