for Blood Omen: The Tale of Darkness2/19/2007 c3 
3Sweet Child
To settle one thing: to say that I surely won't read your story was a one way ticket to having me do exactly that. Yes, I like to go against what people say. Just kidding, don't take it bad on me. =)
So far, what you wrote has been really interesting. I liked the part when Jynx blindfolded herself. Excuse me, but I had to laugh. It was kind of cute in a way, how she suddenly became so tough. Maybe I reacted like that because prior to that she seemed like, well, a sweet, innocent girl.
I hope to see how you'll continue this soon. Nice work so far, really. The first chapter was very intruiging. The second one was kind of boring, but you made up for it in the third. Hope I wasn't too direct, but I have an obnoxious urge to speak what I think. Till next time, then. =)
3Sweet ChildTo settle one thing: to say that I surely won't read your story was a one way ticket to having me do exactly that. Yes, I like to go against what people say. Just kidding, don't take it bad on me. =)
So far, what you wrote has been really interesting. I liked the part when Jynx blindfolded herself. Excuse me, but I had to laugh. It was kind of cute in a way, how she suddenly became so tough. Maybe I reacted like that because prior to that she seemed like, well, a sweet, innocent girl.
I hope to see how you'll continue this soon. Nice work so far, really. The first chapter was very intruiging. The second one was kind of boring, but you made up for it in the third. Hope I wasn't too direct, but I have an obnoxious urge to speak what I think. Till next time, then. =)
2/18/2007 c3 8Sophia Victoria
What a great cliffhanger there. It's so great, I have to hang myself to a nearby cliff just to submit a review!
Anyways, you made one typo, but the story's plot seems pretty suprising . . . what's on your mind!^-^
x/ Dark Snow Angel /x
8Sophia VictoriaWhat a great cliffhanger there. It's so great, I have to hang myself to a nearby cliff just to submit a review!
Anyways, you made one typo, but the story's plot seems pretty suprising . . . what's on your mind!^-^
x/ Dark Snow Angel /x
2/7/2007 c2 XasmoVens
Oh this is great! *is waiting for evil to take over*
I really like Blood Omen, Jynx and Aimi are unique and funny [and I liked Jynx's mum too .. heheh]. This second chapter feels like a doorway to something darker.
I hope I'm right x3
And... there ARE male characters ahead, right? xD
Very cool idea, it's worth being excited about!
Oh this is great! *is waiting for evil to take over*
I really like Blood Omen, Jynx and Aimi are unique and funny [and I liked Jynx's mum too .. heheh]. This second chapter feels like a doorway to something darker.
I hope I'm right x3
And... there ARE male characters ahead, right? xD
Very cool idea, it's worth being excited about!
2/7/2007 c2 Sophia Victoria
Oh, that's good, you have things planned out now? Wow, I can't really wait. I'm also in the process of making one but it's not yet out because I have to do some careful research, if you know what I mean! Hope you'll also keep forward for mine! Uh . . . I think I'll release it maybe on the first day of March? . . . not yet sure. . . I'm always not sure!
Okay, keep this going! I like the celery color of hair! :)
x/ Hell Phoenix /x
Oh, that's good, you have things planned out now? Wow, I can't really wait. I'm also in the process of making one but it's not yet out because I have to do some careful research, if you know what I mean! Hope you'll also keep forward for mine! Uh . . . I think I'll release it maybe on the first day of March? . . . not yet sure. . . I'm always not sure!
Okay, keep this going! I like the celery color of hair! :)
x/ Hell Phoenix /x
2/4/2007 c1 Sophia Victoria
Wow . . .sounds juicy. Continue it, I like the way this is going. :)
x/ Hell Phoenix /x
Wow . . .sounds juicy. Continue it, I like the way this is going. :)
x/ Hell Phoenix /x