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for I Get Lost in Your Beauty

4/14/2008 c1 20SheridanSpence
I like the flow and rhyme of this piece. Very well done.
12/6/2007 c1 31poemkitten7
Lovely repetition. Great simplicity and originality. :) Keep up the amazing work! -Sara
3/20/2007 c1 47loveshouldnthurt
"your captivating eyes"

is a great line. simple but elegent.
2/13/2007 c1 146MyDamnedSelf
Wow, very compact I'm not so good at that lol Moving too, surpisingly so for something so short, but you put everything in the right place and there's no real need for more lines. Great job :)
2/11/2007 c1 bipedalcooney
Simple, but beautifully written. I like this a lot, keep writing.
2/4/2007 c1 she smolders
This poem is beautiful in its simplictiy.
2/3/2007 c1 177notated descant
"Getting lost in beauty". Different for everyone, and the title itself is something that anyone can relate to in different forms. I get lost in music so easily. (And music is beautiful, is it not?)

Vivid descriptions, and something that almost everyone has and will feel in their lifetime. Short and sweet... that my favorite kind!

Well done!(& thanks for the review!)

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