
2/3/2007 c1 hellokittygirl
To some extent, I liked this. But I don't really know where the plot goes or what's going on with this story. MAYBE you should add more chapters? I don't know. It had depth, and I must say it was well written, though.
-Lqd
To some extent, I liked this. But I don't really know where the plot goes or what's going on with this story. MAYBE you should add more chapters? I don't know. It had depth, and I must say it was well written, though.
-Lqd