for Death of my Dearest7/17/2007 c1 omgitsmeagain
GAWD I LOVED THIS ONE!
LIKE OMG!
i dont really know what else to say! just that this seems so real to me... but its all in pretty writing and yeah.
-speechless-
GAWD I LOVED THIS ONE!
LIKE OMG!
i dont really know what else to say! just that this seems so real to me... but its all in pretty writing and yeah.
-speechless-
2/8/2007 c1 
464NeverAfter
I love this. It reflects what's going on in my life right now to a T. Except, it wasn't a knife...It was a gun that took him away. I just can't think of anything else to say besides that I connected emotionally to it and LOVED it. Great job! Keep writing!
464NeverAfterI love this. It reflects what's going on in my life right now to a T. Except, it wasn't a knife...It was a gun that took him away. I just can't think of anything else to say besides that I connected emotionally to it and LOVED it. Great job! Keep writing!
2/3/2007 c1 5Rainfall Complexity
Hey, Ana!
And I liked this poem. It captures well the effect of death and the spiralling thoughts of guilt and regret, and I thought it was very well done. Plus, I loved how the ending flowed it brought it all together. Nice job.
And nice to see you on fictionpress, too, :D
5Rainfall ComplexityHey, Ana!
And I liked this poem. It captures well the effect of death and the spiralling thoughts of guilt and regret, and I thought it was very well done. Plus, I loved how the ending flowed it brought it all together. Nice job.
And nice to see you on fictionpress, too, :D