for Roses and Rings8/25/2010 c1 
1x Farii
The first part of the story reminded me of these lyrics:
Once upon a time i was falling in love but now i'm only falling apart.
But yeah, the ending was happy soo i guess it doesn't go :P
Either way, i love
1x FariiThe first part of the story reminded me of these lyrics:
Once upon a time i was falling in love but now i'm only falling apart.
But yeah, the ending was happy soo i guess it doesn't go :P
Either way, i love
11/1/2008 c1 Lauren
great idea and presentation, but you switched the descriptions of Jack. In the beginning he has brown hair and green eyes and in the second description he has honey eyes and raven dark hair. Just thought you might want to know.
great idea and presentation, but you switched the descriptions of Jack. In the beginning he has brown hair and green eyes and in the second description he has honey eyes and raven dark hair. Just thought you might want to know.
6/17/2008 c1 5AnastashaMarie
This was cute. I noticed, though, that at first you describe Jack as having deep brown hair and bright green eyes, but after the page division/break thing (e.i. the line across the page, i'm not sure what you would call it...) you say he has honey eyes and raven hair. Not a big problem but I just wanted you to know.
This story as well as the rest of your work is amazing! keep up the good work!
5AnastashaMarieThis was cute. I noticed, though, that at first you describe Jack as having deep brown hair and bright green eyes, but after the page division/break thing (e.i. the line across the page, i'm not sure what you would call it...) you say he has honey eyes and raven hair. Not a big problem but I just wanted you to know.
This story as well as the rest of your work is amazing! keep up the good work!
6/6/2008 c1 3Kadekksys
HOLY CRAP! that was an AMAZING first sentence! Can I steal it?
and sappy is okay :)
3KadekksysHOLY CRAP! that was an AMAZING first sentence! Can I steal it?
and sappy is okay :)
3/3/2008 c1 166Laura Schiller
Aww...a nice classic romance never goes out of style. I like the language too.
166Laura SchillerAww...a nice classic romance never goes out of style. I like the language too.
2/15/2008 c1 9milenaa
Well, it's a Valentine's Day one-shot, it's supposed to turn out this way, isn't it? nice writing.
9milenaaWell, it's a Valentine's Day one-shot, it's supposed to turn out this way, isn't it? nice writing.
2/14/2007 c1 2StarSplit144
Jack, the air-force officer eh? Yeah maybe a little sappy, but its valentines day. Have some fun
~StarSplit
2StarSplit144Jack, the air-force officer eh? Yeah maybe a little sappy, but its valentines day. Have some fun
~StarSplit
2/11/2007 c1 6Callisto Jean
What can I say other than wow? So here goes...
WOW!
It was very sweet and realistic. I can imagine everything so clearly in my mind. It's almost as if I were Beth herself.
You did a wonderful job. You must be very proud of this piece!
Oh, thank you for reading and reviewing my story. I hope you'll find time to read the others since Cruising Green Waters will be coming to a drastic end soon. :)
6Callisto JeanWhat can I say other than wow? So here goes...
WOW!
It was very sweet and realistic. I can imagine everything so clearly in my mind. It's almost as if I were Beth herself.
You did a wonderful job. You must be very proud of this piece!
Oh, thank you for reading and reviewing my story. I hope you'll find time to read the others since Cruising Green Waters will be coming to a drastic end soon. :)