6/24/2020 c10 6Polished Gem
Okay, I take it you’re not going to finish this story? Last updated in 2011. Okay, that sucks. I was really loving it. If you have it published somewhere I can buy it, please do say so!
Okay, I take it you’re not going to finish this story? Last updated in 2011. Okay, that sucks. I was really loving it. If you have it published somewhere I can buy it, please do say so!
1/2/2020 c10 Guest
Please update!
Please update!
1/16/2017 c10 Guest
Finish already!
Finish already!
3/10/2015 c2 Guest
Are u ever going to update?
Are u ever going to update?
2/8/2015 c10 Update
Hi Secretive,
I saw that you updated a story and was wondering if you'd be updating this one anytime soon? I have been following this story for years, please, I'm begging you as a woman trapped in the desert, give me some water, please! Provide me fuel to go to the next tree (wherever that may be),I'll wait for you, as I have been, but spare the dog a bone every couple of years please hahaha
Hi Secretive,
I saw that you updated a story and was wondering if you'd be updating this one anytime soon? I have been following this story for years, please, I'm begging you as a woman trapped in the desert, give me some water, please! Provide me fuel to go to the next tree (wherever that may be),I'll wait for you, as I have been, but spare the dog a bone every couple of years please hahaha
9/28/2014 c3 2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
Hey Secretive, just wanted to see if you'll be updating this story soon? I know you said on your page that your worried the tone of the story will be different because you've changed as a writer but I myself would rather have a change than nothing. In the same vein, as a great writer, I think you have the skill to pull it off. I'd be happy to beta read and edit the chapter for you and let you know what I think (if you'd like that) but otherwise I don't think that should be what's stopping you from getting back to it (unless you have writer's block, then we're in the shit lol). I know you also mentioned the publishing issue but perhaps you could do like the others before you, finish the story on this site, go through and edit it (getting rid of the previous issue) add a twist or change it a bit and then go for it. Canid did that with her stories and I think it worked quite well for her.
Sorry to be posting on such an early chapter, I had already posted a review on the last chapter so it wouldn't let me leave it there (.
Hope this finds you well, all the best.
Paola
Hey Secretive, just wanted to see if you'll be updating this story soon? I know you said on your page that your worried the tone of the story will be different because you've changed as a writer but I myself would rather have a change than nothing. In the same vein, as a great writer, I think you have the skill to pull it off. I'd be happy to beta read and edit the chapter for you and let you know what I think (if you'd like that) but otherwise I don't think that should be what's stopping you from getting back to it (unless you have writer's block, then we're in the shit lol). I know you also mentioned the publishing issue but perhaps you could do like the others before you, finish the story on this site, go through and edit it (getting rid of the previous issue) add a twist or change it a bit and then go for it. Canid did that with her stories and I think it worked quite well for her.
Sorry to be posting on such an early chapter, I had already posted a review on the last chapter so it wouldn't let me leave it there (.
Hope this finds you well, all the best.
Paola
7/28/2014 c10 toffeema
I know it's 2014, but maybe update?! Squeal - I love forehead kisses! :)
I know it's 2014, but maybe update?! Squeal - I love forehead kisses! :)
5/24/2014 c5 Taint.Revile.Elude
Willa's character is a bit sketchy I think. She is supposedly a bitch but she is also quite the prude. Sex-talk makes her stutter and spew nonsense, it's odd for a young woman in college. Also, she doesn't have to take care of this guy just because she knocked him into a fountain, so I find her situation implausible. I don't know anyone, not even the most caring, who would practically babysit someone they don't like - even in they did fancy a shag, which Willa does not. Yet.
Willa's character is a bit sketchy I think. She is supposedly a bitch but she is also quite the prude. Sex-talk makes her stutter and spew nonsense, it's odd for a young woman in college. Also, she doesn't have to take care of this guy just because she knocked him into a fountain, so I find her situation implausible. I don't know anyone, not even the most caring, who would practically babysit someone they don't like - even in they did fancy a shag, which Willa does not. Yet.
5/3/2014 c9 Fangalitious
You know... you're three years of not updating anniversary is coming up... You'd have time to write an update chapter for it. Just sticking that out there... 'Cause I miss this story and don't want it to be stopped...
You know... you're three years of not updating anniversary is coming up... You'd have time to write an update chapter for it. Just sticking that out there... 'Cause I miss this story and don't want it to be stopped...
3/15/2014 c10 stefeni
Plzzz update...love ur story soooo much...Spencer and willa are soooo funny..can't wait to see Spencer meet Willahs family...
Plzzz update...love ur story soooo much...Spencer and willa are soooo funny..can't wait to see Spencer meet Willahs family...
2/14/2014 c10 7loivissa17
it has been years, i know. still... please please continue this story! and all your other unfinished ones for that matter... please?
:)
it has been years, i know. still... please please continue this story! and all your other unfinished ones for that matter... please?
:)
11/18/2013 c10 Oh come on
Oh come on! How long has it been? Years? You probably have no intention of ever finishing this story but just so you know,you have loyal readers who keep coming back to this site hoping that maybe just maybe by some miracle you updated at least a chapter of this story.
I really really like...no LOVE your story
Update please,Pretty please!
Oh come on! How long has it been? Years? You probably have no intention of ever finishing this story but just so you know,you have loyal readers who keep coming back to this site hoping that maybe just maybe by some miracle you updated at least a chapter of this story.
I really really like...no LOVE your story
Update please,Pretty please!
6/24/2013 c1 Desperate Reader
I don't know how long I have been coming back to this site even when I have lost interest in it but I have been coning back,hoping that you have updated or better yet finished the book! Love love your book! You probably won't read my review but hey I'm hoping that there other pleas that you have read will make you continue.
Anywho,compliments on the great work and yeah much love.
Loyal fan!
I don't know how long I have been coming back to this site even when I have lost interest in it but I have been coning back,hoping that you have updated or better yet finished the book! Love love your book! You probably won't read my review but hey I'm hoping that there other pleas that you have read will make you continue.
Anywho,compliments on the great work and yeah much love.
Loyal fan!
5/27/2013 c6 shelly7rox
Alright, first of all I love love love that you have created a number of stories featuring colored protagonists. There aren't as many as there should so u rock for that. Plus, I looove Willa. I love the fact that she wants to be a therapist but she can't even figure out when a guy likes her-I find that pretty ironic. Oh, and I can't wait till we find out why she acts the ways she acts-there had to be an underlying cause to all that anger, right? Anywho, love the story gurl! Keep it up!
Alright, first of all I love love love that you have created a number of stories featuring colored protagonists. There aren't as many as there should so u rock for that. Plus, I looove Willa. I love the fact that she wants to be a therapist but she can't even figure out when a guy likes her-I find that pretty ironic. Oh, and I can't wait till we find out why she acts the ways she acts-there had to be an underlying cause to all that anger, right? Anywho, love the story gurl! Keep it up!