
11/14/2007 c1 aimee kate
Wow, you have a knack for creative such dynamic characters! You always leave me wishing there was just one more chapter to read.
Wow, you have a knack for creative such dynamic characters! You always leave me wishing there was just one more chapter to read.
11/8/2007 c8 Ri
Ouch payback really is a bitch. lol Great chapter as usual!
Argh, I know what you mean about procastinating.. I should be studying for my exams (14, 15, 16 Nov) _ I hate uni!
Cool, you watch Taiwanese and Korean stuff as well? Any recommendations?
Ouch payback really is a bitch. lol Great chapter as usual!
Argh, I know what you mean about procastinating.. I should be studying for my exams (14, 15, 16 Nov) _ I hate uni!
Cool, you watch Taiwanese and Korean stuff as well? Any recommendations?
11/7/2007 c8 nomoreaccountonfictionpress
That was a great chapter! I like that they are getting closer, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
That was a great chapter! I like that they are getting closer, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/4/2007 c8 singyourHEARTout
ugh, i love this story
it's insane.
out of all your other ones, i'd really have to say that this one's my favourite. the characters are just so engaging (not that they weren't in your other ones) but the circumstances here are more appealing to me. ahh, cliche never disappoints me. anyway,
i love Willa's father
like, seriously. i REALLY would enjoy seeing her brothers.
ahah, and that comment about her mother and cookies - in the other chapter, i'm guessing? - was hilarious.
"i like cookies."
give me a moment to cackle silently to myself.
gosh . . . oh, and i'm a little confused - not confused . . . just blank, actually - on Spencer's relationship with Ana. they're in a relationship, yes, but if they don't have time for each other, why are they still WITH each other? i mean, it's not that hard to break it off.
well, okay, i wouldn't know but -
who asked who to be boyfriend/girlfriend? even when they knew that they wouldn't be spending time together?
why did Ana even agree?
bgah, anyway, i was just wondering.
hmm . . .
i guess, that's it. i love it!
ugh, i love this story
it's insane.
out of all your other ones, i'd really have to say that this one's my favourite. the characters are just so engaging (not that they weren't in your other ones) but the circumstances here are more appealing to me. ahh, cliche never disappoints me. anyway,
i love Willa's father
like, seriously. i REALLY would enjoy seeing her brothers.
ahah, and that comment about her mother and cookies - in the other chapter, i'm guessing? - was hilarious.
"i like cookies."
give me a moment to cackle silently to myself.
gosh . . . oh, and i'm a little confused - not confused . . . just blank, actually - on Spencer's relationship with Ana. they're in a relationship, yes, but if they don't have time for each other, why are they still WITH each other? i mean, it's not that hard to break it off.
well, okay, i wouldn't know but -
who asked who to be boyfriend/girlfriend? even when they knew that they wouldn't be spending time together?
why did Ana even agree?
bgah, anyway, i was just wondering.
hmm . . .
i guess, that's it. i love it!
11/3/2007 c8
4fluffykitty
If it helps, reading your story is also a form of me procrastinating from writing a paper for MY English class as well. But my English class, undoubtedly (it being Freshman Composition), is a crapload easier than yours. I'm so excited, though. I get to take British Literature next semester! I've been looking forward to this class for a long, long time. Okay, now for your feedback. I like the way you eased into describing Willa as opposed to just having her know what she looked like right off the bat. The description made it much easier for me to picture her. I was only wondering why you were doing it now and not prior [to this chapter]. Now that I think about it, it though, you might have described her previously and I just don't remember. The holding hands "scene", as one would call it, was absolutely adorable. This was my reaction: *with a goofy grin* "Aw... that's so wonderful!" I like Willa's fear of making boys cry. Why WAS Brad crying? Will we ever find out, because now I'm just curious. Either way, it was a pleasure to read, and I'm anticipating your next update. I'm a big fan of yours.

If it helps, reading your story is also a form of me procrastinating from writing a paper for MY English class as well. But my English class, undoubtedly (it being Freshman Composition), is a crapload easier than yours. I'm so excited, though. I get to take British Literature next semester! I've been looking forward to this class for a long, long time. Okay, now for your feedback. I like the way you eased into describing Willa as opposed to just having her know what she looked like right off the bat. The description made it much easier for me to picture her. I was only wondering why you were doing it now and not prior [to this chapter]. Now that I think about it, it though, you might have described her previously and I just don't remember. The holding hands "scene", as one would call it, was absolutely adorable. This was my reaction: *with a goofy grin* "Aw... that's so wonderful!" I like Willa's fear of making boys cry. Why WAS Brad crying? Will we ever find out, because now I'm just curious. Either way, it was a pleasure to read, and I'm anticipating your next update. I'm a big fan of yours.
11/2/2007 c8 Inky-Angel
I love your author's note. It was almost as funny as chapter eight! =D Spencer totally wants Willa. Which is totally obvious, yes, but I like stating the obvious. Which explains that whole last sentence!
Oh yeah, good job, I'm a rabid fan, continue writing, ect. bye now!
I love your author's note. It was almost as funny as chapter eight! =D Spencer totally wants Willa. Which is totally obvious, yes, but I like stating the obvious. Which explains that whole last sentence!
Oh yeah, good job, I'm a rabid fan, continue writing, ect. bye now!
11/2/2007 c8
2Rose Jameson
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED the Good God, did I just become asthmatic? part! It was so funny!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED the Good God, did I just become asthmatic? part! It was so funny!
11/2/2007 c8
19jekodama
Meh, procrastination is the mother of all the fun things in the world, don't worry! Besides, asian dramas are cool! XD
Did anyone else hear the bells of lurve in the air? lol! I insist on my theory: Spencer has loved Willa for a long time, maybe he got together with Ana just to be near Willa, but Willa, being the stubborn mule she is, treated him badly. Sometimes I wish they were real people, so I could meet her and them smack her upside the head! XD
And now she's sick! LOL! Will he nurse her back to health? That would be so adorable of him!
Keep procrastinating!
Until the next review!

Meh, procrastination is the mother of all the fun things in the world, don't worry! Besides, asian dramas are cool! XD
Did anyone else hear the bells of lurve in the air? lol! I insist on my theory: Spencer has loved Willa for a long time, maybe he got together with Ana just to be near Willa, but Willa, being the stubborn mule she is, treated him badly. Sometimes I wish they were real people, so I could meet her and them smack her upside the head! XD
And now she's sick! LOL! Will he nurse her back to health? That would be so adorable of him!
Keep procrastinating!
Until the next review!