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16Hellcat81
hey there, loved the update. my mailbox has been empty for quite some time now. willa is so funny. she actually made a guy cry while having sex? i can't believe she did sth. wrong. maybe he was extremly sensitive or she was just that amazing that made him cry of happiness. :D anyway, i think the tatoo idea is pretty good. i like that you put meanings behind each one. the meanings are so obvious at times, it makes it especially original.
16Hellcat81hey there, loved the update. my mailbox has been empty for quite some time now. willa is so funny. she actually made a guy cry while having sex? i can't believe she did sth. wrong. maybe he was extremly sensitive or she was just that amazing that made him cry of happiness. :D anyway, i think the tatoo idea is pretty good. i like that you put meanings behind each one. the meanings are so obvious at times, it makes it especially original.
10/31/2007 c8 FamousOneLiners
i lovelovelove it!
i lovelovelove it!
10/31/2007 c8 Ravestna
i'm glad shes sick now spencer can take care of her. i liked this chapter plz update soon
x x xRavestnax X x
i'm glad shes sick now spencer can take care of her. i liked this chapter plz update soon
x x xRavestnax X x
10/31/2007 c8 Morgan Marie
Amazing chapter; absolutely loved every little bit!
Watch out for those Korean drama's. They will pull you in. Like, First Love of a Royal Prince, or something to that effect. That was seriously my absolute favorite Korean drama, next to Winter Sonata. I would always avoid assignments by watching drama's, and somehow, in the end, actually managed to get stuff finished. Weird, right?
Anywho, I can't wait for more!
Amazing chapter; absolutely loved every little bit!
Watch out for those Korean drama's. They will pull you in. Like, First Love of a Royal Prince, or something to that effect. That was seriously my absolute favorite Korean drama, next to Winter Sonata. I would always avoid assignments by watching drama's, and somehow, in the end, actually managed to get stuff finished. Weird, right?
Anywho, I can't wait for more!
10/31/2007 c8 abc1234
I love your story! Finally another chapter. I'm not saying tha you took a along time to update, it's just that I would check everyday if you had updated and finally today you did. Actually I think you updated yesterday, but I read it today. Spencer gets hotter and more complex every chapter, and Willa sounds so beaautiful.Can't wait for the next update!
I love your story! Finally another chapter. I'm not saying tha you took a along time to update, it's just that I would check everyday if you had updated and finally today you did. Actually I think you updated yesterday, but I read it today. Spencer gets hotter and more complex every chapter, and Willa sounds so beaautiful.Can't wait for the next update!
10/31/2007 c8 1victim of reality88
hey great chap as usual. I love Spencer. I want him! lol. Anyways please UPDATE ASAP!
1victim of reality88hey great chap as usual. I love Spencer. I want him! lol. Anyways please UPDATE ASAP!
10/31/2007 c8 16Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic
aww rhats so cute
update soon
oh and dont feel too bad
i read this instead of working :P
which is less efective at time consumption than writin it
but still
midge
16Midge-The-Hopeless-Romanticaww rhats so cute
update soon
oh and dont feel too bad
i read this instead of working :P
which is less efective at time consumption than writin it
but still
midge
10/30/2007 c5 Unsociably Acceptable
OMG! I SO TOTALLY SAW THAT ONE COMING!...but that so doesn't mean that i was laughing my head off at it. ah, wonderful. just wonderful! kudos to you, gi-o-gantic kudos to you!
OMG! I SO TOTALLY SAW THAT ONE COMING!...but that so doesn't mean that i was laughing my head off at it. ah, wonderful. just wonderful! kudos to you, gi-o-gantic kudos to you!
10/30/2007 c8 CHIIJOY
OH I love dramas. Have you seen Mars? I stand by it as one of the very best, at least in plotline for me.
Anywhos, loved the chapter. Update soon. :)
OH I love dramas. Have you seen Mars? I stand by it as one of the very best, at least in plotline for me.
Anywhos, loved the chapter. Update soon. :)
10/30/2007 c8 3Venus Smurf1
If it makes you feel any better, I do the avoiding-papers-by-writing-stories thing all the time. In fact, I think I ONLY update when I have an assignment due the next day.
And I think it was worth it, if only for us. This was an amazing chapter! It's so good to see them sorta getting along. I can't wait for more...and I REALLY can't wait to find out how Ana will react to this whole pretend relationship thing. Somehow, I don't think she'll be happy about it.
3Venus Smurf1If it makes you feel any better, I do the avoiding-papers-by-writing-stories thing all the time. In fact, I think I ONLY update when I have an assignment due the next day.
And I think it was worth it, if only for us. This was an amazing chapter! It's so good to see them sorta getting along. I can't wait for more...and I REALLY can't wait to find out how Ana will react to this whole pretend relationship thing. Somehow, I don't think she'll be happy about it.
10/30/2007 c8 OoohLookACat
tisk tisk
updating instead of doing homework?
what a bad student
lol it's all good though
i sometimes do that too :)
loved the chapter
funny at the end with the 'you got me sick!' part
can't wait for more
izzie
tisk tisk
updating instead of doing homework?
what a bad student
lol it's all good though
i sometimes do that too :)
loved the chapter
funny at the end with the 'you got me sick!' part
can't wait for more
izzie
10/30/2007 c8 5thoughtsofwisdom
I for one am glad that ur class sucks or else i would not have read that lovely chapter. Get a move on child sparks need to fly!
5thoughtsofwisdomI for one am glad that ur class sucks or else i would not have read that lovely chapter. Get a move on child sparks need to fly!
10/30/2007 c8 pete's sake delete the account
Woohoo! My favorite sort of story! A romance with a semi-violent, complex, slightly obtuse girl and complicated, good, unusual guy! A lousy way to describe them, I know, but forgive me: at the moment, I'm so tired that my favorite adjective is "squimshed". It's one of those late-night invention words, one designed to fit in any situation when you can't think of the right word.
But, on to the review! I love the depth in the characters, how real they both seem. But go back to giving Spencer some spice, okay? He was insulting her, teasing her so much before that now he seems a little too pleasant. I like him that way, to be sure, but...just make sure characterization is always realistic. With every action and reaction, ask *why* the character is doing what they're doing.
Also, please for the love of Pete make Ana break up with Spencer. I absolutely despise the cliché, awkward, semi-immoral stories that happen when the semi/would-be couple goes behind half of the legit couple's back. I don't know if that made any sense...but basically, just make Ana dump him. Or make Spencer gently tell her he needs more than sex. Something. Please.
Anyway, I like the story, and I look forward to reading more.
Woohoo! My favorite sort of story! A romance with a semi-violent, complex, slightly obtuse girl and complicated, good, unusual guy! A lousy way to describe them, I know, but forgive me: at the moment, I'm so tired that my favorite adjective is "squimshed". It's one of those late-night invention words, one designed to fit in any situation when you can't think of the right word.
But, on to the review! I love the depth in the characters, how real they both seem. But go back to giving Spencer some spice, okay? He was insulting her, teasing her so much before that now he seems a little too pleasant. I like him that way, to be sure, but...just make sure characterization is always realistic. With every action and reaction, ask *why* the character is doing what they're doing.
Also, please for the love of Pete make Ana break up with Spencer. I absolutely despise the cliché, awkward, semi-immoral stories that happen when the semi/would-be couple goes behind half of the legit couple's back. I don't know if that made any sense...but basically, just make Ana dump him. Or make Spencer gently tell her he needs more than sex. Something. Please.
Anyway, I like the story, and I look forward to reading more.
10/30/2007 c8 Eve
oh, which dramas were they?
anyway, nice! i read your other storyas well, undetected canoodling and i cant wait for an update on that either!
oh, which dramas were they?
anyway, nice! i read your other storyas well, undetected canoodling and i cant wait for an update on that either!
10/30/2007 c8 1RayDuSoleil
Hi!
Loved the chapter.
So I know you're avoiding your homework and you don't enjoy this class but you should DO IT. I feel like a mom,hehe.
Nah, I actually didn't major in English at my school here because I don't like the classes they offer. They come across as blaze.
If you write about something you're interested in or find a way to connect something interesting to your topic, you should be fine.
Happy writing!
1RayDuSoleilHi!
Loved the chapter.
So I know you're avoiding your homework and you don't enjoy this class but you should DO IT. I feel like a mom,hehe.
Nah, I actually didn't major in English at my school here because I don't like the classes they offer. They come across as blaze.
If you write about something you're interested in or find a way to connect something interesting to your topic, you should be fine.
Happy writing!