for A Lesson In Love 1016/25/2007 c6 bluz
hm, so his been crushing on this girl for two years now, hm and meet Wila the beginning of the school year.
So the only assumption that i am making of this that he either say her before then even met that day, or sadly he is speaking of another girl.
hm, so his been crushing on this girl for two years now, hm and meet Wila the beginning of the school year.
So the only assumption that i am making of this that he either say her before then even met that day, or sadly he is speaking of another girl.
6/25/2007 c4 
1TheHeadxTheHeart
God... I love how the characters are! And I feel like I am Willie, only I would've gotten so frustrated I'd have cried instead of got angry. XD I don't have the heart to be mad at people.
1TheHeadxTheHeartGod... I love how the characters are! And I feel like I am Willie, only I would've gotten so frustrated I'd have cried instead of got angry. XD I don't have the heart to be mad at people.
6/25/2007 c6 CHIIJOY
Uncharted territory. What is it again? Terra incognito? I love that phrase. Anywho, freckles are so cute on guys! I need to go on a freckle search. Anywhos, please update soon. :)
Uncharted territory. What is it again? Terra incognito? I love that phrase. Anywho, freckles are so cute on guys! I need to go on a freckle search. Anywhos, please update soon. :)
6/25/2007 c6 Semira
If Spencer's crush isn't Willa (they haven't known each other for two years), I'm definitely wondering "who is it"?
If Spencer's crush isn't Willa (they haven't known each other for two years), I'm definitely wondering "who is it"?
6/25/2007 c3 TheHeadxTheHeart
XD I've got that tightened muscle-y feeling in my stomach that i always get from a good book... er, story... or is it just anticipation topped with excitement and the element of surprise? XD
XD I've got that tightened muscle-y feeling in my stomach that i always get from a good book... er, story... or is it just anticipation topped with excitement and the element of surprise? XD
6/25/2007 c6 Brekay
I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed you before, but I have to say that your writing has grown a great deal from your very first story! It's quite remarkable, actually.
I think your creative writing teacher had a point. It's true that you do like to write angry girls. But, hey, it's entertaining, so it works for me. Nadine and Jane are not very angry, though.
Actually, Willa's probably my favourite heroine. She actually acknowledges the fact that Spencer and Mike are good looking, but she doesn't like them based on her own principles. Her dad's also amusing. Gotta love those overprotective dads.
So, hey, good luck with the course scheduling and it's great that you write and are actually studying English in college. More power to you. ;)
I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed you before, but I have to say that your writing has grown a great deal from your very first story! It's quite remarkable, actually.
I think your creative writing teacher had a point. It's true that you do like to write angry girls. But, hey, it's entertaining, so it works for me. Nadine and Jane are not very angry, though.
Actually, Willa's probably my favourite heroine. She actually acknowledges the fact that Spencer and Mike are good looking, but she doesn't like them based on her own principles. Her dad's also amusing. Gotta love those overprotective dads.
So, hey, good luck with the course scheduling and it's great that you write and are actually studying English in college. More power to you. ;)
6/25/2007 c6 4fluffykitty
I really do like this story. But how has he known her for two years but just met her at the beginning of THIS school year? I'm guessing that'll be explained. My theory is silent observation. It's the whole... secret crush thing that gets to me, I think. Like in... Society Girls by Sarah Mason. Of course, I'm not telling you to read that story, I'm just using an example I recently read. Hmm... I almost want to see one of those stories turned around. Now I'm just rambling. Love the chapter, can't wait to read the next.
4fluffykittyI really do like this story. But how has he known her for two years but just met her at the beginning of THIS school year? I'm guessing that'll be explained. My theory is silent observation. It's the whole... secret crush thing that gets to me, I think. Like in... Society Girls by Sarah Mason. Of course, I'm not telling you to read that story, I'm just using an example I recently read. Hmm... I almost want to see one of those stories turned around. Now I'm just rambling. Love the chapter, can't wait to read the next.
6/25/2007 c6 anne
i want more!
i want more!
6/25/2007 c6 Siriusly it wasn't me
WHAT? I thought he was taking her somewhere to have his wicked way with her because he had been so overcome with passion after hearing her say something about him and sex... :P LoL... I'm stupid... but seriously now, when is he dumping Ana and going for her? Assuming it is her he's talking about (but you know what happens when you assume...) and if it isn't, it will be, I'm sure :P Anyway, I hope you update soon 'cuase I love this story and had been waiting for thi chapter for what seemed like forever... :P UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
WHAT? I thought he was taking her somewhere to have his wicked way with her because he had been so overcome with passion after hearing her say something about him and sex... :P LoL... I'm stupid... but seriously now, when is he dumping Ana and going for her? Assuming it is her he's talking about (but you know what happens when you assume...) and if it isn't, it will be, I'm sure :P Anyway, I hope you update soon 'cuase I love this story and had been waiting for thi chapter for what seemed like forever... :P UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
6/25/2007 c6 51bangbangstartagain
aqualung is awesome :)
and so was this chapter. great work. you had me so mortified at the start. i didn't know how she was going to get out of it. i totally would have bolted, even if spencer was holding on. heh. i can't wait for more.
51bangbangstartagainaqualung is awesome :)
and so was this chapter. great work. you had me so mortified at the start. i didn't know how she was going to get out of it. i totally would have bolted, even if spencer was holding on. heh. i can't wait for more.