
1/11/2012 c10
3no-ones-puppet
Oooh I really hope this isn't dead again! I just found it... Wouldn't that just suck. Lol. Hope your busy life isn't running you too far into the ground... Some of us feel your pain when it comes to college so at least your not alone! :)
I seriously do love the lightheartedness of this story though, that and the fact that spencer sounds like the perfect guy which of course only really happens in fiction. I can't wait to see how they interact with the family for the weekend, and if her mom is anything like mine she'd push for the two of them to share a bed. :)

Oooh I really hope this isn't dead again! I just found it... Wouldn't that just suck. Lol. Hope your busy life isn't running you too far into the ground... Some of us feel your pain when it comes to college so at least your not alone! :)
I seriously do love the lightheartedness of this story though, that and the fact that spencer sounds like the perfect guy which of course only really happens in fiction. I can't wait to see how they interact with the family for the weekend, and if her mom is anything like mine she'd push for the two of them to share a bed. :)
11/30/2011 c10 Claire
i really like your stories. i just hope to see more soon
i really like your stories. i just hope to see more soon
11/19/2011 c6 emina
hey um chapter 6 isnt showing up so it'd be great if you could put it back up! thanks!
hey um chapter 6 isnt showing up so it'd be great if you could put it back up! thanks!
10/25/2011 c10
5whenyoucantholdon
Why do you write such good stories? :) this one is amazing! Update soon, pretty please? (:

Why do you write such good stories? :) this one is amazing! Update soon, pretty please? (:
10/22/2011 c10 dulce
AHHHHH you updated!
It's been a pretty long time since you updated but I'm glad the story and the characters still feel the same.
AHHHHH you updated!
It's been a pretty long time since you updated but I'm glad the story and the characters still feel the same.
9/22/2011 c10 frouwe
After reading the rest of your stories (in this account), I'm surprised to find anything so lighthearted. I'm guessing this one is like, for relief when everything else gets too heavy?
I do like it, though. I agree wit many of the things Willa likes (I want her car, and I think lefties are the coolest thing ever, which is sort of narcissistic since I am one, and other little details like that).
Spencer and Ana's relationship has seemed fishy to me for a while now. Not from the very beginning or anything, and not only because of the conversation in the woods. Just some things Spencer has said, though I'm not sure how that falls in with Ana's anguish in chapter 5 if they weren't a legitimate couple after all...
After reading the rest of your stories (in this account), I'm surprised to find anything so lighthearted. I'm guessing this one is like, for relief when everything else gets too heavy?
I do like it, though. I agree wit many of the things Willa likes (I want her car, and I think lefties are the coolest thing ever, which is sort of narcissistic since I am one, and other little details like that).
Spencer and Ana's relationship has seemed fishy to me for a while now. Not from the very beginning or anything, and not only because of the conversation in the woods. Just some things Spencer has said, though I'm not sure how that falls in with Ana's anguish in chapter 5 if they weren't a legitimate couple after all...
9/4/2011 c10 Hey
This is my favourite story! (ok one of!) but honestly can you update PLEASE! I love spencer! I love the lightheartedness of it all and most of all I love Willa...also can you update javi's story too :) You right awesomely, continue being awesome lol
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! (sorry to for being pushy but I'm desperate hehe)
This is my favourite story! (ok one of!) but honestly can you update PLEASE! I love spencer! I love the lightheartedness of it all and most of all I love Willa...also can you update javi's story too :) You right awesomely, continue being awesome lol
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! (sorry to for being pushy but I'm desperate hehe)
8/9/2011 c10 Fangalitious
I love it! The whole plot line is really good and I'm excited to see where it goes to. Update soon!
I love it! The whole plot line is really good and I'm excited to see where it goes to. Update soon!
7/25/2011 c10 Lea Brown
This was the first story I ever read on Fp in 2008 so It's awesome to read another chapter.I love your writing style. :D
This was the first story I ever read on Fp in 2008 so It's awesome to read another chapter.I love your writing style. :D
7/24/2011 c10 fsadkjlkj
I'm really enjoying reading this story. Update soon, please! :)
I'm really enjoying reading this story. Update soon, please! :)
7/18/2011 c10 BettyBoo
finally finding the time to read this chapter made my Monday. damn, you're brilliant and can't wait to read the dinner at Willa's - it's going to be something else, lol!
finally finding the time to read this chapter made my Monday. damn, you're brilliant and can't wait to read the dinner at Willa's - it's going to be something else, lol!
7/13/2011 c10 Papillonblanc
Oh my goodness
Such a cliffhanger! I am in love with this story
I really enjoy the plot and really want to know how their relationship will progress
And also how Bethany and Micky's relationship will end up like
Ahhhh and will War possibly be coming back to the states in the future...?
Can't wait and I hope you come back soon to finish this story :)
Oh my goodness
Such a cliffhanger! I am in love with this story
I really enjoy the plot and really want to know how their relationship will progress
And also how Bethany and Micky's relationship will end up like
Ahhhh and will War possibly be coming back to the states in the future...?
Can't wait and I hope you come back soon to finish this story :)