
11/19/2010 c9 Cher
I love this story. Maybe because it reminds me so much of my first love in college. Hope you update soon. Please update soon:)
I love this story. Maybe because it reminds me so much of my first love in college. Hope you update soon. Please update soon:)
9/4/2010 c9 Pen. Name. DUH
will you be continuing this story? I sure hope so...the plot is so interesting! and I love the characters!
will you be continuing this story? I sure hope so...the plot is so interesting! and I love the characters!
8/29/2010 c9 Brainworks
i love all you works!
i hope you can continue writing chapters for this one and the others you haven't finished.. i cant wait to read the, :)
i love all you works!
i hope you can continue writing chapters for this one and the others you haven't finished.. i cant wait to read the, :)
8/2/2010 c2
8Written
very cute story so far! i love it, cant wait to see where it goes. sad to see that ana is a haughty bio major though... i'm in sciences, but i hate that attitude! it's so wrongheaded.

very cute story so far! i love it, cant wait to see where it goes. sad to see that ana is a haughty bio major though... i'm in sciences, but i hate that attitude! it's so wrongheaded.
8/2/2010 c9 Georgia
No! I really want to know what happens next! D: I really really hope you update sometime soon X) You're such a fantastic writer, I love Spencer and Willa's personalities, they're so cool ;)
I'm now going to stalk your page thingo to see if you've written anything else ehehehe
No! I really want to know what happens next! D: I really really hope you update sometime soon X) You're such a fantastic writer, I love Spencer and Willa's personalities, they're so cool ;)
I'm now going to stalk your page thingo to see if you've written anything else ehehehe
3/20/2010 c9 write-or-wrong
You will break my heart if you don't update this story. I just found it and I noticed you haven't updated in forever. Its great please don't abandon it. :)
You will break my heart if you don't update this story. I just found it and I noticed you haven't updated in forever. Its great please don't abandon it. :)
3/19/2010 c9 malka
i really hope that you would update this story! love it so much !
i really hope that you would update this story! love it so much !
3/3/2010 c9 Ultimate-Umbrella
Just started reading this s.tory today and i really enjoyed it. I noticed though that you last updated in 2008 which was 2years ago. Just wanting to know if your going to update soon?
Love Spencer's character, poor guy is desperately in love with Willa (who i only just learnt in Chap9 was African American?)
Hope you continue this story!
Just started reading this s.tory today and i really enjoyed it. I noticed though that you last updated in 2008 which was 2years ago. Just wanting to know if your going to update soon?
Love Spencer's character, poor guy is desperately in love with Willa (who i only just learnt in Chap9 was African American?)
Hope you continue this story!
3/2/2010 c9 Cecily Mitchell
Finish please really love this story and am looking forward to seeing what happens to them
Finish please really love this story and am looking forward to seeing what happens to them
11/18/2009 c9 Paola
Allo.?.
Are you still alive.?.
Will this ever be updated.?.
can you please message me when you get back on fictionpress at
Please don't let this be the end of this epic piece.!.
Allo.?.
Are you still alive.?.
Will this ever be updated.?.
can you please message me when you get back on fictionpress at
Please don't let this be the end of this epic piece.!.
11/6/2009 c9 Olga
I love this story, I hope you update it soon. Thanks.
I love this story, I hope you update it soon. Thanks.
11/1/2009 c9
1igot4
I so agree with everything that THROUGHSHADOWNSFALLING said. You are a great writer, You got like 605(well now including me) 606 reviews. this is obviously a loved story. Its my fav. out of all your stories its so well written. I would absolutely love for you to continue with it. Please give us an update soon. Dying to know what happens next, like does Ana find out and if so how does she feel about it? And what about Bethany & Mike is he really serious about her? Also Talon want see what he's all about too. Oh! And when they go to her house for the weekend will they get closer, kiss maybe:) Oh I cant wait! UPDATE SOON PRETTY PLEASE!

I so agree with everything that THROUGHSHADOWNSFALLING said. You are a great writer, You got like 605(well now including me) 606 reviews. this is obviously a loved story. Its my fav. out of all your stories its so well written. I would absolutely love for you to continue with it. Please give us an update soon. Dying to know what happens next, like does Ana find out and if so how does she feel about it? And what about Bethany & Mike is he really serious about her? Also Talon want see what he's all about too. Oh! And when they go to her house for the weekend will they get closer, kiss maybe:) Oh I cant wait! UPDATE SOON PRETTY PLEASE!
10/25/2009 c9 throughshadowsfalling
I know the likelihood of you taking this review seriously, is probably unlikely. But I wish you would, because it would be completely ahh-some if you did. I really like your story and trust me I don't just say that to everyone. I'm very picky, but you're a great writer, I can see that. It's also likely that you've had reviews just like this one I am writing for more than a year and yet you still haven't updated another chapter. Which leaves me to guess that this won't make a difference to you because you're probably still getting reviews like this. However, I think you have a really good plot going for you and if you picked it up again, you could make a huge run with it. And since your writing skills are amazing, I would suggest that you make the most out of it. Honestly, your talent is like none that I have ever seen. You have a way of making the reader connect with the character, because said character is fun, quirky, weird, funny and so on and so forth. I really hope you finish the book, because I would extremely enjoy reading it.
Well, if you take my advice and DO write the story, I will be extremely happy.
If you don't, ah well, it is your story anyway and the writer can choose what he/she wants.
Have a good life!
Oh...and p.s.- I love your story!
I know the likelihood of you taking this review seriously, is probably unlikely. But I wish you would, because it would be completely ahh-some if you did. I really like your story and trust me I don't just say that to everyone. I'm very picky, but you're a great writer, I can see that. It's also likely that you've had reviews just like this one I am writing for more than a year and yet you still haven't updated another chapter. Which leaves me to guess that this won't make a difference to you because you're probably still getting reviews like this. However, I think you have a really good plot going for you and if you picked it up again, you could make a huge run with it. And since your writing skills are amazing, I would suggest that you make the most out of it. Honestly, your talent is like none that I have ever seen. You have a way of making the reader connect with the character, because said character is fun, quirky, weird, funny and so on and so forth. I really hope you finish the book, because I would extremely enjoy reading it.
Well, if you take my advice and DO write the story, I will be extremely happy.
If you don't, ah well, it is your story anyway and the writer can choose what he/she wants.
Have a good life!
Oh...and p.s.- I love your story!