2/5/2007 c1 8dani.crimson
Nice idea, I really enjoyed reading this. Your spelling and gammar were excellent as far as I could tell. Just one small point, you might want to put this is fantasy instead of young adult as it seems more of a fantasy story. Keep writing, you have an amazing, ordinary idea.
B-A-o-t-N
Nice idea, I really enjoyed reading this. Your spelling and gammar were excellent as far as I could tell. Just one small point, you might want to put this is fantasy instead of young adult as it seems more of a fantasy story. Keep writing, you have an amazing, ordinary idea.
B-A-o-t-N