for Attack Of The Killer Shrimp3/12/2013 c1 Lorenzo
Sooo funny
Sooo funny
7/28/2009 c1 
8Rayder99
So.. very... random... I LOVE IT! It's the kind of thing i would write! (See "The Boy" by Ms. Critic if you don't believe me, and yes, I am the other person she said that helped write it) wow i got oof topic. ill try not to do that again heh heh. anywho, i liked it.
8Rayder99So.. very... random... I LOVE IT! It's the kind of thing i would write! (See "The Boy" by Ms. Critic if you don't believe me, and yes, I am the other person she said that helped write it) wow i got oof topic. ill try not to do that again heh heh. anywho, i liked it.
5/23/2008 c1 The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
LOL! That was great. It's a shame that I can't put it in my C2 because of all the brain-sucking action and how I want to keep my C2 family appropiate. But I did REALLY like this and I didn't see that ending coming, it was TOTALLY random even for you!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
LOL! That was great. It's a shame that I can't put it in my C2 because of all the brain-sucking action and how I want to keep my C2 family appropiate. But I did REALLY like this and I didn't see that ending coming, it was TOTALLY random even for you!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
5/20/2008 c1 8Rainbow Pineapple
YAY FOR BOB FOR SAVING THE WORLD! GO BOB!
lol, that was SOO random! I love randomness.
XDD
8Rainbow PineappleYAY FOR BOB FOR SAVING THE WORLD! GO BOB!
lol, that was SOO random! I love randomness.
XDD
5/23/2007 c1 Double A
This is a reply to Ms Crictic,
OK I dont care what you say, "Little H" could never write this story no matter how hard she tried, this story is five steps ahead of her, and thus we can see that mabey a twelve yaer old could mabey write this story, but not a seven year old.
Double A
This is a reply to Ms Crictic,
OK I dont care what you say, "Little H" could never write this story no matter how hard she tried, this story is five steps ahead of her, and thus we can see that mabey a twelve yaer old could mabey write this story, but not a seven year old.
Double A
5/22/2007 c1 Ms. Critic
Um...
That pretty much sums it up. Lots of punctuation errors, and this seems like a story little H. could write! (and she's only 7) Keep trying Bobby!
Um...
That pretty much sums it up. Lots of punctuation errors, and this seems like a story little H. could write! (and she's only 7) Keep trying Bobby!
4/28/2007 c1 21Reaper
Yes!
Okay, now onto the Shrimp. Very awesome. I can see this being made into a really huge, epic movie. like War of the Worlds, only better...and without Tom Cruise. I'm gonna go and read the sequel now.
~Reaper
21ReaperYes!
Okay, now onto the Shrimp. Very awesome. I can see this being made into a really huge, epic movie. like War of the Worlds, only better...and without Tom Cruise. I'm gonna go and read the sequel now.
~Reaper
3/29/2007 c1 Double A
Ok, I just had to review it again. I mean after my lame first review and all the things I just noticed when I reread it, ya. So ANYWAYS
I saw that you fixed the carp thing good for you.
One question though, where did he get the lasagna so fast?
well other than that your story rocks very very funny.
Bye! Keep writing! Double A
Ok, I just had to review it again. I mean after my lame first review and all the things I just noticed when I reread it, ya. So ANYWAYS
I saw that you fixed the carp thing good for you.
One question though, where did he get the lasagna so fast?
well other than that your story rocks very very funny.
Bye! Keep writing! Double A
3/11/2007 c1 1ButterbeansXx
LMAO! i was just pissing myself :P I loved that it was hilarious! NO NOT THE SHRIMP :P x
1ButterbeansXxLMAO! i was just pissing myself :P I loved that it was hilarious! NO NOT THE SHRIMP :P x
2/16/2007 c1 18TT-da-lamanite
oh wow, that was stupidly funny, I like the fact that it was lasgna that killed the shrimp, and at the top you got a typo,
"...and all that carp!" I didnt know that carp was involved.
18TT-da-lamaniteoh wow, that was stupidly funny, I like the fact that it was lasgna that killed the shrimp, and at the top you got a typo,
"...and all that carp!" I didnt know that carp was involved.
2/15/2007 c1 Double A
When did you start posting storys?
Anyways cool story realy great loved it gotta go
Keep writing DA
When did you start posting storys?
Anyways cool story realy great loved it gotta go
Keep writing DA
2/7/2007 c1 71Bob Evans
Well, well, well; Mr. R.E.D. posted something, hmm? And not just that, but the Killer Shrimp saga too.
Gosh dang it, I hear that thing way too much. I'm guessing Silly Sam gets a piece of the action too?
71Bob EvansWell, well, well; Mr. R.E.D. posted something, hmm? And not just that, but the Killer Shrimp saga too.
Gosh dang it, I hear that thing way too much. I'm guessing Silly Sam gets a piece of the action too?
2/6/2007 c1 Guest
The opposite of this being an episode of Garfield, right?
The opposite of this being an episode of Garfield, right?