for Unexpected Dangers6/21/2008 c17 
6Carmel March
Fantastic job on this chapter. Absolute genius. Can't wait for more :)
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchFantastic job on this chapter. Absolute genius. Can't wait for more :)
~Carm~
5/25/2008 c17 1runningXwithXtheXwerewolves
i'll save herman! good chapter, but please update soon, if not ill have to reread the story all over again and that would make me sad :(. UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! :P
1runningXwithXtheXwerewolvesi'll save herman! good chapter, but please update soon, if not ill have to reread the story all over again and that would make me sad :(. UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! :P
5/22/2008 c17 5Herineca
-tackle hugs you from behind- I AM SO SORRY! MY COMPUTER HATES ME! we had to get a guy out about three times to restart its computer heart, and now its living on life support. honestly, its so old it could be classed as a senior citizen! and you know its bad when geeks laugh at your computer. My friends brother was laughing with his friend about how my computer didnt have a good graphics card or something.
you should start taking better care of Herman. i saw Review button services prowling around the neighbourhood. I hope they dont get him! but dont worry, even if they do, I'll adopt him and take care of him until Review Button Services lets you have him back.
Aw, poor Jessie. the freak of freaks. not a very nice title.
aw! -hugs- I'm glad i could make you laugh when you didnt feel like it. Glad to know i can make people laugh! because im not good at too many things ^.^ your nephew sounds cute. I'm sure your mum can read it now. Angels have cool powers like that. and they have wings, so they can like fly around and point at people in heavy traffic and be like 'So long, suckers!'
and now I'm going to bed. for i am tired. and because i damn well want to XD
5Herineca-tackle hugs you from behind- I AM SO SORRY! MY COMPUTER HATES ME! we had to get a guy out about three times to restart its computer heart, and now its living on life support. honestly, its so old it could be classed as a senior citizen! and you know its bad when geeks laugh at your computer. My friends brother was laughing with his friend about how my computer didnt have a good graphics card or something.
you should start taking better care of Herman. i saw Review button services prowling around the neighbourhood. I hope they dont get him! but dont worry, even if they do, I'll adopt him and take care of him until Review Button Services lets you have him back.
Aw, poor Jessie. the freak of freaks. not a very nice title.
aw! -hugs- I'm glad i could make you laugh when you didnt feel like it. Glad to know i can make people laugh! because im not good at too many things ^.^ your nephew sounds cute. I'm sure your mum can read it now. Angels have cool powers like that. and they have wings, so they can like fly around and point at people in heavy traffic and be like 'So long, suckers!'
and now I'm going to bed. for i am tired. and because i damn well want to XD
5/8/2008 c17 6Sarah3922
First thing I did when I woke up this morning was check my mail and I actually squealed to see an update from you so I HAD to open and make sure you weren't teasing me. But its taken me ALL bloody day to get around to reading it because life sucks in its demand that I participate. You know your ranting and insanity is completely understandable to me because mine is of a very similar verity...*scans A/N to be sure she didn't miss anything* Okay now the important stuff... Loved the chapter! Who needs plot development? Give me a hot not-vampire making out and I'm there. But Jake must get a boot in the bum for interrupting. UGH! I feel so bad for Jessie's mom, I can't imagine losing my son then finding out he's not dead but a killer vampire. Then there's her dear dad that has to hold the world together for her. *sighs* When this is over the man gets a monument in my front yard... But not until we get a conclusion. That way if he dies I can put "in loving memory" instead of "in dedication to"...WOW I'm babbling and this is getting long. Much love! I'm off to work on my stories. *gives Herman a month's supply of cookies* Tootles.
6Sarah3922First thing I did when I woke up this morning was check my mail and I actually squealed to see an update from you so I HAD to open and make sure you weren't teasing me. But its taken me ALL bloody day to get around to reading it because life sucks in its demand that I participate. You know your ranting and insanity is completely understandable to me because mine is of a very similar verity...*scans A/N to be sure she didn't miss anything* Okay now the important stuff... Loved the chapter! Who needs plot development? Give me a hot not-vampire making out and I'm there. But Jake must get a boot in the bum for interrupting. UGH! I feel so bad for Jessie's mom, I can't imagine losing my son then finding out he's not dead but a killer vampire. Then there's her dear dad that has to hold the world together for her. *sighs* When this is over the man gets a monument in my front yard... But not until we get a conclusion. That way if he dies I can put "in loving memory" instead of "in dedication to"...WOW I'm babbling and this is getting long. Much love! I'm off to work on my stories. *gives Herman a month's supply of cookies* Tootles.
3/31/2008 c16 iFlowers
That is so sad!I hope you are taking this calmlt.I would cry myself to sleep if I you.
That is so sad!I hope you are taking this calmlt.I would cry myself to sleep if I you.
1/10/2008 c16 5Herineca
oh, you poor thing. i feel really sad too. i wish i could help. you said my reviews always cheer you up, but I'm not sure if this will. I send a very special hug to you, though. a really special one. i wish i could give it in person, but we're kinda continents away.
I really send you heaps and heaps of hugs, and I will still wait until you update the story agian or we just randomly PM each other (does PM sound dirty to you? sorry, just had to ask) or what ever. But i know you will be ok. when we've talked, you seem very strong and i know you are. and im not going to go into the whole "you have courage- in here -points to your heart-" crud because i dunno about you, but i hate it when i get that talk. a lady on a camp did it when i wanted to be in the same cabin as my sister and friends, but nope. she went into the speech and i got annoyed. eventually i just cut her off and went into my stupid cabin.
right, off subject. sorry. just like me to get off topic and talk about something completely rando- im doing it again. SORRY! im just gonna stop now before i did what i did when i sent a letter to someone from my old school- and there i go again. ok, NOW im going to stop. see? i stopped! oh wait...
5Herinecaoh, you poor thing. i feel really sad too. i wish i could help. you said my reviews always cheer you up, but I'm not sure if this will. I send a very special hug to you, though. a really special one. i wish i could give it in person, but we're kinda continents away.
I really send you heaps and heaps of hugs, and I will still wait until you update the story agian or we just randomly PM each other (does PM sound dirty to you? sorry, just had to ask) or what ever. But i know you will be ok. when we've talked, you seem very strong and i know you are. and im not going to go into the whole "you have courage- in here -points to your heart-" crud because i dunno about you, but i hate it when i get that talk. a lady on a camp did it when i wanted to be in the same cabin as my sister and friends, but nope. she went into the speech and i got annoyed. eventually i just cut her off and went into my stupid cabin.
right, off subject. sorry. just like me to get off topic and talk about something completely rando- im doing it again. SORRY! im just gonna stop now before i did what i did when i sent a letter to someone from my old school- and there i go again. ok, NOW im going to stop. see? i stopped! oh wait...
12/14/2007 c3 4Undecided.And.Confused
Wow, that whole man thing outside the window is real creepy, I bet its that Damon man. Why is the text bold anyways? Just asking. ^_^
4Undecided.And.ConfusedWow, that whole man thing outside the window is real creepy, I bet its that Damon man. Why is the text bold anyways? Just asking. ^_^
12/14/2007 c1 Undecided.And.Confused
Nice start, I like the description of the apartment. And the little mystery in the end. Your wording could be a little better, and two spelling mistakes I noticed:
"I said (by) to my true friends" bye
"with a (cough) that looks" couch
Thanks for adding me two your favorites, you're the best!
Nice start, I like the description of the apartment. And the little mystery in the end. Your wording could be a little better, and two spelling mistakes I noticed:
"I said (by) to my true friends" bye
"with a (cough) that looks" couch
Thanks for adding me two your favorites, you're the best!
12/5/2007 c15 1runningXwithXtheXwerewolves
OMG you are alive it is nice to know that! The chapter was good and i know how you feel when your characters refuse to talk to you. but i can't stand it when all of them decide to talk and you don't have anything to write with...keep up the great work! UPDATE SOON! :P
1runningXwithXtheXwerewolvesOMG you are alive it is nice to know that! The chapter was good and i know how you feel when your characters refuse to talk to you. but i can't stand it when all of them decide to talk and you don't have anything to write with...keep up the great work! UPDATE SOON! :P
12/5/2007 c15 6Carmel March
That was amazingly amazing. Even though it's been awhile since I've set eyes on this story (about which I am terribly sorry about!), I immediately got right back into it the moment I started reading. This story keeps getting deeper and even more interesting. Keep up this wonderful work, and I'm looking forward to reading more :)
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchThat was amazingly amazing. Even though it's been awhile since I've set eyes on this story (about which I am terribly sorry about!), I immediately got right back into it the moment I started reading. This story keeps getting deeper and even more interesting. Keep up this wonderful work, and I'm looking forward to reading more :)
~Carm~
12/2/2007 c15 5Herineca
yay! you updated!
'Really, what good are they for protection if they couldn’t even fight Edward and my brother?' ^.^ lol.
“I’m fine. Drained but fine. Want mine again?” hehe. this story always makes me laugh.
aww! your poor mum! -hugs- i warn you, her hair might grow back curly or in an afro. it happened to my Mum. she hates it XD. hope you get over the block soon. if you need any help, just give me an email. i dont know how helpful i can be, but my friend's story always seems to advance a little when im around...^.^
sorry its a short review! for some reason im losing my randomness...NO! I WILL NOT BE NORMAL!
'ok, you stay in the square, but i'm staying right here in my circle'. its a bit lame, isnt it? but i thought it up. i dunno why. i think it was during math...-shrugs- math normally kills my brain cells. how does math work on you? my job involves math so much and i accidently short changed a guy. luckily he caught it ^.^; eheh...
well, hope you can udpdate again soon! -hugs- you need hugs...and Herman needs food. -feeds- ^.^
5Herinecayay! you updated!
'Really, what good are they for protection if they couldn’t even fight Edward and my brother?' ^.^ lol.
“I’m fine. Drained but fine. Want mine again?” hehe. this story always makes me laugh.
aww! your poor mum! -hugs- i warn you, her hair might grow back curly or in an afro. it happened to my Mum. she hates it XD. hope you get over the block soon. if you need any help, just give me an email. i dont know how helpful i can be, but my friend's story always seems to advance a little when im around...^.^
sorry its a short review! for some reason im losing my randomness...NO! I WILL NOT BE NORMAL!
'ok, you stay in the square, but i'm staying right here in my circle'. its a bit lame, isnt it? but i thought it up. i dunno why. i think it was during math...-shrugs- math normally kills my brain cells. how does math work on you? my job involves math so much and i accidently short changed a guy. luckily he caught it ^.^; eheh...
well, hope you can udpdate again soon! -hugs- you need hugs...and Herman needs food. -feeds- ^.^
11/29/2007 c15 6Sarah3922
You'll have trouble loosing me as a reader. I mean I still read stuff that only gets updated once a year...I'm desperate. If you want someone to bounce ideas off of I'm always around, though editing isn't my line, I've been in the market for someone to cover that for me for a long while.The chapter was great and well worth the wait. She recovers quickly from blood loss doesn't she? I totally agree with Jessie, Damon MUST STOP THE CHEST WOUNDS! A girl can only take so much drama from a guy, hot guardian or not, before she wants to smack him. You had be worried when you used the name Edward, automatically Edward Cullens comes to mind and for half a minute there he was standing next to Jason and I just couldn't stand it. Hm I loved it as always and send best wishes and my prayers along to you, your mom, and family...I might kidnap Herman if you neglect him for too long, let him work a little for me over on fanfiction. Anyway I gotta run. Take care!
6Sarah3922You'll have trouble loosing me as a reader. I mean I still read stuff that only gets updated once a year...I'm desperate. If you want someone to bounce ideas off of I'm always around, though editing isn't my line, I've been in the market for someone to cover that for me for a long while.The chapter was great and well worth the wait. She recovers quickly from blood loss doesn't she? I totally agree with Jessie, Damon MUST STOP THE CHEST WOUNDS! A girl can only take so much drama from a guy, hot guardian or not, before she wants to smack him. You had be worried when you used the name Edward, automatically Edward Cullens comes to mind and for half a minute there he was standing next to Jason and I just couldn't stand it. Hm I loved it as always and send best wishes and my prayers along to you, your mom, and family...I might kidnap Herman if you neglect him for too long, let him work a little for me over on fanfiction. Anyway I gotta run. Take care!
10/27/2007 c1 2Sir Scott
Not a bad introduction, since I didn't read the first one I don't know which is better. I guess a lot of people want to leave the small town and go to larger one and when they get there they find things aren't what they thought they would be. Good luck with this story.
~SirScott
2Sir ScottNot a bad introduction, since I didn't read the first one I don't know which is better. I guess a lot of people want to leave the small town and go to larger one and when they get there they find things aren't what they thought they would be. Good luck with this story.
~SirScott