for Into Oblivion 22/10/2007 c1 nofaceme
I like how all the words are broken up...i like how it spaces the words and makes them bold and it sounds good when spoken out loud too! I love how this is how all of this feels. And just reading this reminds me of so many things. Thank you, keep it up!
I like how all the words are broken up...i like how it spaces the words and makes them bold and it sounds good when spoken out loud too! I love how this is how all of this feels. And just reading this reminds me of so many things. Thank you, keep it up!
2/10/2007 c1 
11Chemically Induced
you know, this poem would be good, and pretty, and effective without the stylish typography: the bold letters, the spacing, the italics. to me, words have enough force and latent energy on their own, and they don't need to be dressed up at all to hit you like a baseball bat across the teeth when they must. as long as said poet know how to do that, they can. and you can! so, anyway, thats just my opinion. "the slience/ between heartbeats/ and the thunder" is very good; my fav. "explosions/implode" also, is a nice image-crafter. :) keep it up.
love, c.induced.
11Chemically Inducedyou know, this poem would be good, and pretty, and effective without the stylish typography: the bold letters, the spacing, the italics. to me, words have enough force and latent energy on their own, and they don't need to be dressed up at all to hit you like a baseball bat across the teeth when they must. as long as said poet know how to do that, they can. and you can! so, anyway, thats just my opinion. "the slience/ between heartbeats/ and the thunder" is very good; my fav. "explosions/implode" also, is a nice image-crafter. :) keep it up.
love, c.induced.