
4/20/2008 c1
59Kikyuu
Well, what can I say other than that you nearly had me crying in less than 10 words. I enjoyed the way you built it up, right up until the last sentence. In fact, I enjoyed it so much that I really can't find anything else to say.

Well, what can I say other than that you nearly had me crying in less than 10 words. I enjoyed the way you built it up, right up until the last sentence. In fact, I enjoyed it so much that I really can't find anything else to say.
5/15/2007 c1
9just a ray of sunshine
Wow.
This was so beautiful. I'm sitting here in my English class and the teacher is talking, yet I'm sitting on this laptop and reading, like my eyes can't be torn away from this. I want to cry after reading this, like I'm overflowing with emotion or something. I loved the last line the best.
I'm still in shock.

Wow.
This was so beautiful. I'm sitting here in my English class and the teacher is talking, yet I'm sitting on this laptop and reading, like my eyes can't be torn away from this. I want to cry after reading this, like I'm overflowing with emotion or something. I loved the last line the best.
I'm still in shock.
5/3/2007 c1
37le roi des pirates
Hah, I cried, you know that? It was that bad. Well, it was that good. Please keep writing, I wanna read more! I absolutely love all your stories, and I want to see some more. :)

Hah, I cried, you know that? It was that bad. Well, it was that good. Please keep writing, I wanna read more! I absolutely love all your stories, and I want to see some more. :)
5/3/2007 c1 fishslappinghighlandflinger
This is stunning! I am speechless. It was very touching and the last line really struck me hard. Wonderfully written.
~Stan the Nerd
This is stunning! I am speechless. It was very touching and the last line really struck me hard. Wonderfully written.
~Stan the Nerd