for Silent Petals7/31/2008 c1 XxGoddess of MexX
Were have I been? hehe such angst and blood? -_- And she's only 12- I wonder why don't you finish any of this good stories. Its like you want to leave cliffhanger's for all your stories.
Were have I been? hehe such angst and blood? -_- And she's only 12- I wonder why don't you finish any of this good stories. Its like you want to leave cliffhanger's for all your stories.
7/30/2008 c2 Someone
-woah at the end-
Wow I actually enjoyed this one. :3 This guy is mysteriously cool. And Alayna is a messed up girl. Love it.
-woah at the end-
Wow I actually enjoyed this one. :3 This guy is mysteriously cool. And Alayna is a messed up girl. Love it.
7/30/2008 c1 Someone
Nice! I like how fastpace this story is and the cliffhanger was dreadful! But really liked it. -watch out for grammar- other than that- very cool.
Nice! I like how fastpace this story is and the cliffhanger was dreadful! But really liked it. -watch out for grammar- other than that- very cool.
5/27/2007 c2 
6Carmel March
That was a great start to this story. I'm already intrigued. Good job on this, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchThat was a great start to this story. I'm already intrigued. Good job on this, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
~carm~
2/16/2007 c2 Scarlet Hero
God that part about her metting the killer was suspenseful. Write more soon, k? -stalks jessica-
God that part about her metting the killer was suspenseful. Write more soon, k? -stalks jessica-
2/16/2007 c1 Darket
Well it was good. I mean it's one of your better stories to come around honestly. It's kind of a break from your other work. I'm impressed that your grammar work is still good. My grammar and writing skills have kind of dumbed down because of a three month break I took from writing. I need to do some work... But you're still doing good. I'm sorry it took me so long to read this. I wanted to get this one out of the way because tomorrow I'm turning 19 and in an hour i"m about to go have my B-day dinner. Anyways, peace.
Well it was good. I mean it's one of your better stories to come around honestly. It's kind of a break from your other work. I'm impressed that your grammar work is still good. My grammar and writing skills have kind of dumbed down because of a three month break I took from writing. I need to do some work... But you're still doing good. I'm sorry it took me so long to read this. I wanted to get this one out of the way because tomorrow I'm turning 19 and in an hour i"m about to go have my B-day dinner. Anyways, peace.
2/15/2007 c1 1Panther Mage
Your speaking French now? Ok...well not my kind of story so far, but I'll be waiting to see what happens. Oh, hope you had a happy valentine yesterday. See ya
1Panther MageYour speaking French now? Ok...well not my kind of story so far, but I'll be waiting to see what happens. Oh, hope you had a happy valentine yesterday. See ya
2/14/2007 c1 4TESTING-123
The murder was caught two days ago, and was executed yesterday. It was suppose to be a peaceful town…
Shouldn’t murder be murderer? Shouldn’t suppose be supposed? Shouldn’t I say hi? Lol, heyah! Remember me? ((hopes you do)) Nice story. Kind of…scary. What happened to Rosette? Eep! Pweese update. Happy Valentine’s Day! Don’t get sick from all that candy, lol.
~Aredhel
4TESTING-123The murder was caught two days ago, and was executed yesterday. It was suppose to be a peaceful town…
Shouldn’t murder be murderer? Shouldn’t suppose be supposed? Shouldn’t I say hi? Lol, heyah! Remember me? ((hopes you do)) Nice story. Kind of…scary. What happened to Rosette? Eep! Pweese update. Happy Valentine’s Day! Don’t get sick from all that candy, lol.
~Aredhel
2/10/2007 c1 15x-kit-x
This is really a great story and I hope that you decide to continue it as I for one will definately read it. Good luck :) I liked your descriptions at the beginning, they created a good sense of imagery without going over the top and I felt I could connect with Alaynas ideas love for the snow's beauty but dislike of the snow at the same time.
15x-kit-xThis is really a great story and I hope that you decide to continue it as I for one will definately read it. Good luck :) I liked your descriptions at the beginning, they created a good sense of imagery without going over the top and I felt I could connect with Alaynas ideas love for the snow's beauty but dislike of the snow at the same time.