for Nothing2/11/2007 c1 
27S. Ben Beach
You portrayed the emptiness, the void feeling (well that's what I got from this..) really well.
"The tingle returns from time to time
The tingle of a tickling nose
Sniffing the scent of my death
Inhaling the traces of life I have left"
-Those four lines were awesome, keep it up.
27S. Ben BeachYou portrayed the emptiness, the void feeling (well that's what I got from this..) really well.
"The tingle returns from time to time
The tingle of a tickling nose
Sniffing the scent of my death
Inhaling the traces of life I have left"
-Those four lines were awesome, keep it up.