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2/11/2007 c1 27S. Ben Beach
You portrayed the emptiness, the void feeling (well that's what I got from this..) really well.

"The tingle returns from time to time

The tingle of a tickling nose

Sniffing the scent of my death

Inhaling the traces of life I have left"

-Those four lines were awesome, keep it up.

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