for Duck on a Pond2/13/2007 c1 
24sincerely disregard
This has great imagery, nice flow, the works. The only thing I almost get hung up with is the capitalization at the beginning of every line, as I feel it sort of breaking up. But that's just a personal preference.
24sincerely disregardThis has great imagery, nice flow, the works. The only thing I almost get hung up with is the capitalization at the beginning of every line, as I feel it sort of breaking up. But that's just a personal preference.