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6Carmel March
This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchThis story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!
~Carm~
6/30/2008 c3 5inkspatters
OMG, she's one of those people that rings you up at ungodly hours of night/morning. This is why I have to trust the people who get my phone number implicitly, lol.
Hilarious chapter, Linkyn needed to get his 'beauty sleep' I was in stitches. Amren just gets better and better.
5inkspattersOMG, she's one of those people that rings you up at ungodly hours of night/morning. This is why I have to trust the people who get my phone number implicitly, lol.
Hilarious chapter, Linkyn needed to get his 'beauty sleep' I was in stitches. Amren just gets better and better.
6/30/2008 c2 inkspatters
Wow, she's so funny. I just have to mention one thing though, there have been a few spelling mistakes, left out words etc. I think a common mistake that you make is substituting 'me' for 'my', but hey, it's an easy mistake to make and it doesn't really detract from your story.
I'm still loving this. I only realised how great it was in this chapter that you managed to introduce us to your characters ans give us a strong sense of who they were without revealing their names. Brilliant. By the way, I am in full agreement with Lynkin, Amren is a really unique name. It's cool.
Wow, she's so funny. I just have to mention one thing though, there have been a few spelling mistakes, left out words etc. I think a common mistake that you make is substituting 'me' for 'my', but hey, it's an easy mistake to make and it doesn't really detract from your story.
I'm still loving this. I only realised how great it was in this chapter that you managed to introduce us to your characters ans give us a strong sense of who they were without revealing their names. Brilliant. By the way, I am in full agreement with Lynkin, Amren is a really unique name. It's cool.
6/30/2008 c1 inkspatters
Haha, that was awesome. The guy sounds fun, if a little chauvinistic and this girl is just, hilarious. Love it.
Haha, that was awesome. The guy sounds fun, if a little chauvinistic and this girl is just, hilarious. Love it.
6/21/2008 c7 4P.V Shann
Very very interesting. I don't normally read dialogue based stories, but your's, I must admit, has me hooked.
I love Amren's and Linkyn's personality. So solid.
:D
CkC
4P.V ShannVery very interesting. I don't normally read dialogue based stories, but your's, I must admit, has me hooked.
I love Amren's and Linkyn's personality. So solid.
:D
CkC
6/21/2008 c2 P.V Shann
Haha
I love your story. It's friggin' sweet so far.
Amren's awesome and guys with piercing are smexii
oh, By the by
i like your writing style hehe
:D
CkC
Haha
I love your story. It's friggin' sweet so far.
Amren's awesome and guys with piercing are smexii
oh, By the by
i like your writing style hehe
:D
CkC
6/21/2008 c14 6Carmel March
Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchEven though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!
~Carm~
6/4/2008 c14 Jadeisms
OH MY GOD!
i'm in love with this story. i stumbled upon it by accident (it's currently one thirty in teh morning...can you say insomnia?) and i'm glad i did.
it will be a new obsession.
i love the charecters...they feel like real people, and the way you write...it's like i forget that i'm reading and just seeing it happen in my head. the mark of a very gifted writer...
kudos to you!
OH MY GOD!
i'm in love with this story. i stumbled upon it by accident (it's currently one thirty in teh morning...can you say insomnia?) and i'm glad i did.
it will be a new obsession.
i love the charecters...they feel like real people, and the way you write...it's like i forget that i'm reading and just seeing it happen in my head. the mark of a very gifted writer...
kudos to you!
3/14/2008 c12 tobslytobby
I love this story! it's so well written and the charecters are absolutely amazing. i love all of them. i lover you're writing style too. Sarcastic and creatice. i love it! update super soon please! I love Linkyn!
I love this story! it's so well written and the charecters are absolutely amazing. i love all of them. i lover you're writing style too. Sarcastic and creatice. i love it! update super soon please! I love Linkyn!
3/12/2008 c1 2Yannick
That was so original. I've thought about that too... what would happen if we went out THAT late at night?
Well done, I like their personalities too.
Not much to say, just that sometimes it's a bit annoying reading short sentences. Of course, for a short story I suppose it's acceptable...
Maybe?
2YannickThat was so original. I've thought about that too... what would happen if we went out THAT late at night?
Well done, I like their personalities too.
Not much to say, just that sometimes it's a bit annoying reading short sentences. Of course, for a short story I suppose it's acceptable...
Maybe?
2/4/2008 c11 6Carmel March
Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchEven though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)
~Carm~