for The one you can't forget2/24/2007 c1 
168Wylloa
Oh, dont edit it! If you change the words once they have spilled themselves form your lips, they wont hold the same magick.
168WylloaOh, dont edit it! If you change the words once they have spilled themselves form your lips, they wont hold the same magick.
2/14/2007 c1 24she's not breathing
yeah. no, one can tell you haven't edited this. which is neat - it shows another step in the process. it - runs, on its own legs. & it's just very beautiful. much more flow than being carried by just words - or at least that's how it read to me. smoother, you know? i like it a lot. just the story, the personal side to it, it - just really good. you gave backdrop here without alienating the reader. i'm pretty sure people will gush about being able to relate. or whatever they gush about. haha. mm but lovely work, darling.
-kait
24she's not breathingyeah. no, one can tell you haven't edited this. which is neat - it shows another step in the process. it - runs, on its own legs. & it's just very beautiful. much more flow than being carried by just words - or at least that's how it read to me. smoother, you know? i like it a lot. just the story, the personal side to it, it - just really good. you gave backdrop here without alienating the reader. i'm pretty sure people will gush about being able to relate. or whatever they gush about. haha. mm but lovely work, darling.
-kait
2/14/2007 c1 Zyth
i really like this, mainly cos I can relate to it so well.
Its simple yet... I dunno.
Deep
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i really like this, mainly cos I can relate to it so well.
Its simple yet... I dunno.
Deep
x