for What Promises We Break8/13/2012 c19 i need a fix
i just found this and you haven't updated since like january but...
PLEASE. I NEED YOU TO UPDATE. JESUS I NEED A FIX OF THIS GLORIOUS STORY. IT HAS BEEN 3.. NO 4 MINUTES NOW SINCE I FINISHED READING ALL THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN I. NEED. MORE!
i.. i don't know what i'll do if i don't get more... please... please help by updating... please
i just found this and you haven't updated since like january but...
PLEASE. I NEED YOU TO UPDATE. JESUS I NEED A FIX OF THIS GLORIOUS STORY. IT HAS BEEN 3.. NO 4 MINUTES NOW SINCE I FINISHED READING ALL THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN I. NEED. MORE!
i.. i don't know what i'll do if i don't get more... please... please help by updating... please
7/4/2012 c19 
10Sae Ayameko
OH MY GOSH. You were right when you said this was a soap opera. I keep looking forward to each chapter. I feel bad for Jacob though. :c He isn't a bad guy and everyone's picking on him. This story seriously needs a happy ending. Seriously, all these bad things happen, something good needs to come out of it. I really like your stories. Update soon!
10Sae AyamekoOH MY GOSH. You were right when you said this was a soap opera. I keep looking forward to each chapter. I feel bad for Jacob though. :c He isn't a bad guy and everyone's picking on him. This story seriously needs a happy ending. Seriously, all these bad things happen, something good needs to come out of it. I really like your stories. Update soon!
3/20/2012 c19 2BelieveIt
Have to say, I'm pretty hooked on your writing :) Can't wait to read more chapters (that goes for all your stories)!
BelieveIt x
2BelieveItHave to say, I'm pretty hooked on your writing :) Can't wait to read more chapters (that goes for all your stories)!
BelieveIt x
3/19/2012 c19 heyitsstupidme
wow this story is really good the characters are all so komplex and the story itself is really captivating please update i guess it will be very interesting when macario moves to kale
wow this story is really good the characters are all so komplex and the story itself is really captivating please update i guess it will be very interesting when macario moves to kale
3/6/2012 c19 reader
Love the twist in your story and how you create each of the characters plots different and how they interact with each other! update soon!
Love the twist in your story and how you create each of the characters plots different and how they interact with each other! update soon!
2/9/2012 c1 Lee
Hi! I've read this twice now and I've also read the reviews - so I don't have much to add :) I really enjoy this!
Anyway, I really only have one issue... That's Jacob's Bipolar disorder. Idk how much research you've done on it but he doesn't really display the symptoms - i would guess something more like schizophrenia or multiple personalities (whatever they've changed the name of that too this time). Bipolar is when you're depressed (i.e suffering clinical depression not just a sad mood) for a prolonged amount of time - most professionals agree that 2-3 weeks is the norm, followed by a period of the same amount of time feeling exactly the opposite - nothing can bring you down. It's referred to as Manic Depression because of the mania you feel when you're on one end - loss of inhibitions, excited, euphoric etc leading to risk taking etc - and the depression of the other. Anger does of course affect people who suffer bipolar disorder but not to that extent... And that's my issue.
Sorry, my best friend killed herself a short time after we found out she was bipolar, it's a bit of a sore spot.
Love lee xx
Hi! I've read this twice now and I've also read the reviews - so I don't have much to add :) I really enjoy this!
Anyway, I really only have one issue... That's Jacob's Bipolar disorder. Idk how much research you've done on it but he doesn't really display the symptoms - i would guess something more like schizophrenia or multiple personalities (whatever they've changed the name of that too this time). Bipolar is when you're depressed (i.e suffering clinical depression not just a sad mood) for a prolonged amount of time - most professionals agree that 2-3 weeks is the norm, followed by a period of the same amount of time feeling exactly the opposite - nothing can bring you down. It's referred to as Manic Depression because of the mania you feel when you're on one end - loss of inhibitions, excited, euphoric etc leading to risk taking etc - and the depression of the other. Anger does of course affect people who suffer bipolar disorder but not to that extent... And that's my issue.
Sorry, my best friend killed herself a short time after we found out she was bipolar, it's a bit of a sore spot.
Love lee xx
1/29/2012 c19 PlasticBlueInvitations
Oooh, now I'm so nervous! You have got to be one of the best writers who's story I've read in a long time. You've got this awesome web of mystery and suspence go'in on, I luff it! I started this story a little late at night think'in "Oh, ok, I'll just read one or two chapters..." It is now WELL into the morning, and I've decided to forgo sleep altogether. But I just couldn't stop read'in! Thank you so much!
Oooh, now I'm so nervous! You have got to be one of the best writers who's story I've read in a long time. You've got this awesome web of mystery and suspence go'in on, I luff it! I started this story a little late at night think'in "Oh, ok, I'll just read one or two chapters..." It is now WELL into the morning, and I've decided to forgo sleep altogether. But I just couldn't stop read'in! Thank you so much!
1/14/2012 c19 That Boy over There
I love this story it is so intense and there is enough drama without being too over the top :D
I love this story it is so intense and there is enough drama without being too over the top :D
1/12/2012 c1 5Russle
Hey, hi. Nice story. I like the everyday-life kind of plot line. :3
There's quite a bit going on...
Might I suggest you make these into separate stories? Juuuust a thought. It would help to organize things more, I think.
5RussleHey, hi. Nice story. I like the everyday-life kind of plot line. :3
There's quite a bit going on...
Might I suggest you make these into separate stories? Juuuust a thought. It would help to organize things more, I think.
1/12/2012 c19 DinosaursGoROOAARR
*bows in worship of your majestic writing talent*
go Jacob! :D can't wait to see what arsenio says to Kale! Gaaaaaah
*bows in worship of your majestic writing talent*
go Jacob! :D can't wait to see what arsenio says to Kale! Gaaaaaah