for What Promises We Break1/12/2012 c19 Renate
Good to see you updated. I'm still here. ;) Interested in seeing where this is going. Hope you update again soon.
Good to see you updated. I'm still here. ;) Interested in seeing where this is going. Hope you update again soon.
1/12/2012 c19 NinjaMafiaMistress
Please say your gonna update soon i've been waiting for this chappy forever and now i'm really excited to find out what happens next
Please say your gonna update soon i've been waiting for this chappy forever and now i'm really excited to find out what happens next
1/12/2012 c19 Oni
Thanks for the update. I do not mind the soap opera style (as you call it- personally, I think it sounds more like a Korean drama) however, I do wish each update was longer (preferably by 1000 more words). Not possible, I know, but it would occupy us readers until the next update. The short updates are fun to read but leave me feeling like I have a never ending dry throat. I am really thirst for more of this story. So thirsty; must have story; more...
Thanks for the update. I do not mind the soap opera style (as you call it- personally, I think it sounds more like a Korean drama) however, I do wish each update was longer (preferably by 1000 more words). Not possible, I know, but it would occupy us readers until the next update. The short updates are fun to read but leave me feeling like I have a never ending dry throat. I am really thirst for more of this story. So thirsty; must have story; more...
1/3/2012 c14 NightMoon66
This story should have been titled "When The Shit Hits The Fan." Everyone in this story is freaking psychotic. River deals with his emotional pain by his sex addiction even though he has a phobia of commitment. Jacob is a maniac (litterally: manic depression), Nio is abusive and Rio is an enabler. That's forgetting Jericho for the moment.
I love this story and by the time it's over, I have a feeling I'm going to be so pissed it hasn't uploaded in a year.
This story should have been titled "When The Shit Hits The Fan." Everyone in this story is freaking psychotic. River deals with his emotional pain by his sex addiction even though he has a phobia of commitment. Jacob is a maniac (litterally: manic depression), Nio is abusive and Rio is an enabler. That's forgetting Jericho for the moment.
I love this story and by the time it's over, I have a feeling I'm going to be so pissed it hasn't uploaded in a year.
12/28/2011 c18 
4Blo0d StaiNed Rose
wow..i know its been almost a year since you last updated, but i would really love to see this story through..this is one of the only stories that are focused on a variety of charaters and not just a pair, and i love it. i love that we can see all the characters stories, leaving no gaps for us...i really do hope that you will continue this...:)
xxxx BSR xxxx
4Blo0d StaiNed Rosewow..i know its been almost a year since you last updated, but i would really love to see this story through..this is one of the only stories that are focused on a variety of charaters and not just a pair, and i love it. i love that we can see all the characters stories, leaving no gaps for us...i really do hope that you will continue this...:)
xxxx BSR xxxx
11/22/2011 c9 6magnanimousSquirrel
Oooo, things is happenin' now. Everything's all tangled up. Wait a minute...where's Jericho?
6magnanimousSquirrelOooo, things is happenin' now. Everything's all tangled up. Wait a minute...where's Jericho?
11/22/2011 c2 magnanimousSquirrel
Well, I take back what I said about Kale not being a jerk. He and the brother are jerks.
Well, I take back what I said about Kale not being a jerk. He and the brother are jerks.
10/30/2011 c18 Bumblebee
Too many POVs change, really really confusing. Too many character with mental disorder and temper problem too.
But I love Arsenio and Marc :D love how they relationship worked, made my day x3 love Kale too, but Kale is so mysterious! No background story, etc, and I'm really curious. Update soon! :'3
Too many POVs change, really really confusing. Too many character with mental disorder and temper problem too.
But I love Arsenio and Marc :D love how they relationship worked, made my day x3 love Kale too, but Kale is so mysterious! No background story, etc, and I'm really curious. Update soon! :'3
9/3/2011 c13 mOOnsTwilight
Oh..lol i thought you only had 13 chapters but you have more so my last review for chapter 12 is kind of null and void now isnt it? XD well I guess ill read on~ oh and YAY for Kale and Macario drinking together! see, this is what I needed to see, some Macario time :P
Oh..lol i thought you only had 13 chapters but you have more so my last review for chapter 12 is kind of null and void now isnt it? XD well I guess ill read on~ oh and YAY for Kale and Macario drinking together! see, this is what I needed to see, some Macario time :P
9/3/2011 c12 mOOnsTwilight
Great great great story! but...Macario (main character) is getting lost behind Micah and River's relationship...and I like Macario's storyline. And nothing is really happening for Macario relationship-wise as Micah and River are taking up the whole screen D: But i love your writing and you have a good writing style but more Macario please~! ^^ and on to Jericho =D whats with him? mmm mysterious sexy dark raging asshole that feels Macario up mmmmm haha
Great great great story! but...Macario (main character) is getting lost behind Micah and River's relationship...and I like Macario's storyline. And nothing is really happening for Macario relationship-wise as Micah and River are taking up the whole screen D: But i love your writing and you have a good writing style but more Macario please~! ^^ and on to Jericho =D whats with him? mmm mysterious sexy dark raging asshole that feels Macario up mmmmm haha
7/18/2011 c11 Akira
""Then it's not fucking yours to drink!" I glared at the clock on the wall. Stupid clock. All round and white and shit."
It's hilarious when some people (including me) get viciously disgusted at the first thing we look at for simply being there.
Great story so far, by the way:)
""Then it's not fucking yours to drink!" I glared at the clock on the wall. Stupid clock. All round and white and shit."
It's hilarious when some people (including me) get viciously disgusted at the first thing we look at for simply being there.
Great story so far, by the way:)
6/19/2011 c18 1onecrazychicka
I really like this story!
All the charecters are...fairly fucked up, its good the way you keep springing up stuff to keep us reading
homophobic hanging around with a bunch of gays is fuunnnnyyyy
bipolar who wont take his pills- if he truly loved nicky I would have thought he would be glad to have a cure...
I would like to see Rio fall in love with someone...
keep it up! :)
1onecrazychickaI really like this story!
All the charecters are...fairly fucked up, its good the way you keep springing up stuff to keep us reading
homophobic hanging around with a bunch of gays is fuunnnnyyyy
bipolar who wont take his pills- if he truly loved nicky I would have thought he would be glad to have a cure...
I would like to see Rio fall in love with someone...
keep it up! :)
6/1/2011 c18 Fumiki
this story keep me engrossed! Jericho is a psycho... I'm not really fond of Jacob, but I don't want him to get hurt =_=
I don't want any of the character in this story to get hurt! OMG please update already!
this story keep me engrossed! Jericho is a psycho... I'm not really fond of Jacob, but I don't want him to get hurt =_=
I don't want any of the character in this story to get hurt! OMG please update already!