for In My Dreams3/17/2007 c1 
187THROUGHTHESEEYES
This gave me a sense of hope and encouragement...
The last sentence brought the whole poem together...great job!
187THROUGHTHESEEYESThis gave me a sense of hope and encouragement...
The last sentence brought the whole poem together...great job!
2/23/2007 c1 174marshbar960
loved the "highway of my dreams". thanks for sharing and keep writing, kira!
174marshbar960loved the "highway of my dreams". thanks for sharing and keep writing, kira!