for Thoughts3/20/2007 c1 Ajna
I like the free feel to this, with simple and beautiful imagery. The ending can either be really sad or elating, and I love how it's that ending line that dictates a final decision on the feel of the poem.
I like the free feel to this, with simple and beautiful imagery. The ending can either be really sad or elating, and I love how it's that ending line that dictates a final decision on the feel of the poem.
2/23/2007 c1 
174marshbar960
loved the idea behind this poem, as well as the "fields of poppy swaying in the breeze". thanks for sharing and keep writing!
174marshbar960loved the idea behind this poem, as well as the "fields of poppy swaying in the breeze". thanks for sharing and keep writing!