for To Elizabeth, My Muderer3/3/2007 c1 
72angel953
You know what...YOU STARTED THIS WHOLE THING! NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS WOULD I HAVE DIED FOR YOU! IF A BULLET WAS COMING STRAIGHT AT YOU I'D LAUGH AND RUN AWAY!
72angel953You know what...YOU STARTED THIS WHOLE THING! NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS WOULD I HAVE DIED FOR YOU! IF A BULLET WAS COMING STRAIGHT AT YOU I'D LAUGH AND RUN AWAY!
2/22/2007 c1 54the unreal
It's a great poem Caitlin, although i'm not commenting on the fact that its about liz, because im neutral in this.
i like you writing as always... it reminds me of me =]
54the unrealIt's a great poem Caitlin, although i'm not commenting on the fact that its about liz, because im neutral in this.
i like you writing as always... it reminds me of me =]
2/19/2007 c1 15WhenShadowsBleed
well written and expressed. i havent read your writing in so long that i had almost forgotten how amazing it is. ... regardless, it is not the end. im not saying you shouldnt be hurt and upset, but just that you need to pull thru. life still goes on. this is the painful realization i have had to come to before, and i dont want you to hurt so much, and so badly for so long before you see this sick truth. i konw how it hurts to lose a friend, and i would do anything to take that pain away, but i can only help as much as you let me. please...it hurts to see you hurt. no matter what, i still love you.
15WhenShadowsBleedwell written and expressed. i havent read your writing in so long that i had almost forgotten how amazing it is. ... regardless, it is not the end. im not saying you shouldnt be hurt and upset, but just that you need to pull thru. life still goes on. this is the painful realization i have had to come to before, and i dont want you to hurt so much, and so badly for so long before you see this sick truth. i konw how it hurts to lose a friend, and i would do anything to take that pain away, but i can only help as much as you let me. please...it hurts to see you hurt. no matter what, i still love you.
2/18/2007 c1 94shookierewrites
Powerful imagery. Don't worry, these wounds heal. Everyday you'll hurt a little less, then finally you'll find a confident who is twice as loyal, twice as fun, and makes you feel ten thousand times more amazing than any "Elizabeth" could ever have even hoped to make you feel. Look to the silver lining.
-Shookie Smiles Sweetly
94shookierewritesPowerful imagery. Don't worry, these wounds heal. Everyday you'll hurt a little less, then finally you'll find a confident who is twice as loyal, twice as fun, and makes you feel ten thousand times more amazing than any "Elizabeth" could ever have even hoped to make you feel. Look to the silver lining.
-Shookie Smiles Sweetly
2/16/2007 c1 jdjdjdjdjdjdjdjd
DAMN wish I came up with this!
its excatly how I feel when my bestie did that!
DAMN wish I came up with this!
its excatly how I feel when my bestie did that!
2/16/2007 c1 rrx1
I really like this poem... and it reminds me oh too well of an old friend of mine. Very good, very depressing.
I really like this poem... and it reminds me oh too well of an old friend of mine. Very good, very depressing.
2/16/2007 c1 113Travis C. Eckert
A great story about desertion and betrayal, even if it is real, good job with the poem. And it was quite scary.
113Travis C. EckertA great story about desertion and betrayal, even if it is real, good job with the poem. And it was quite scary.
2/16/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
Well written. I'm really sorry to hear about this. :( Do try to be positive and write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Well written. I'm really sorry to hear about this. :( Do try to be positive and write on!
~Anna~ ^_^