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3/6/2007 c1 46antigonelives
Blah. Boring. You could definitely improve this, though, by first unbolding the text so that the poem is easier to read. Add details, description, imagery, SOMETHING to give this poem oomph because it's really bare and because of the actual rendering of the poem, it sounds like what you have to say is being stifled.

And watch your grammar.

2/16/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
Amazing! I am adding this to my C2!

Best Wishes!

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